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Black--Soul
German , Trying to write something worth while. Everyone start small after all. Enjoy the Story fellow Bronys (^///-///^)/)
Black--Soul
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interesting, you got my attention
its a interesting lore to be sure
I can't wait too see more soon
Loved seeing that pony the first time can’t wait to see what you have in store
This is pretty cool 👍 I wonder what nightmare moons and Luna's reaction would be
Can't wait for next chapter 😊
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Ones it's edited i release it 
Im editing it right now. Adding stuff... Im a messy Author
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Hope so. It's from a story i write 2 years ago but got never approved do to grammar. Its also a strong contrast to my more random and adult juice filled story.
I have a lot of lore but i seem to have a bad habit of overdoing it. My most lore heavy story never got approved by the moderation since it had to few mlp in the first chapters apperently
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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What pony? Faust, Nightmaremoon, Luna, Celestia, Cadance, Marksaline, Fluffelpuff, Raven Inkwell?
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I get there in chapter 4 probably. Chapter 3 released today, if i get grammar edited while i'm stuck on the Highway...
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Because they are connected like Day and Night?
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okay then, best of luck!
anyone's
knowledge
completely
First, its spelled once, not ones
Second, you got my curriosity and I will keep track on this story.
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I’m sorry I mean markslaine
i wondered if anyone would ever take a crack at writing out how fluffle's sister ended up being a thing.!
love hw you chaged betewen prspectives! But, is the heart in mother really needed?
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Marksaline is a devouring force of life and death. The only thing stopping her is Fluffelpuff. After a year growing as a individual, did Celestia and Cadance got added. If anything is stopping Marksaline from following her purpose and nature... It deserve a mark all on it's own...
Nope. I could totaly leave it out. But i just put all my heart into this unstoppable force of darkness that get derailed every minute of the day of devouring a world as a hole. So... Meh...
Also this silly littel thing keeps entertaining me
When ever i hear it on the text to speech function. It's silly, but damn! I can't get enough of it.
It's like a Mario game soundtrack. You play them for hours on end and don't grow annoyed of it ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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okay then, hope it goes well for you
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I do you one better! I make her the Main Character, while leaving her as support or even a anti-Hero.
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That stuff is worth: Gold. Thanks
Can't wait for next chapter 😊
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The next chapter have a sneak peak in my newest blog. Enjoy
interesting how you mentioned Derpy. and i noticed, you tend to write necessary wrong
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Thanks. My phone english language is rather bad... Autocorrection works only like 2/5 of the time
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Personally I have the thoery that just like how Celastia and Candace have the dark and light side so to does Marksaline but unlike the others her’s is a actual separate entity aka Flufflypuff
Grammer could use some work. Some sentences just don’t make sense to me
“Did she find Marksaline was missing. Her Escape artist skill was a known phenomenon
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Thanks. As german i sometimes have a different view on how to construct a sentance. Much appreciated ♡
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You payed attention. Well... Guess this will not be that mutch of a 'surprise' later down the road... ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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i hear ya
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there was one fluffle clicp where discord ...discorded...her...she turned into a pink nightmare moon and thumped him with TOM
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No problem
an interesting lore
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It's the counterpart to Harmony construct AB123 trying to pull off his routine.
Next chapter is AB123 and Fr33d0me talking about past, present and future. That will basicly set the tune how things are and how things will be planed to become. If necessary or in AB123 view what will happen once Starlight Glimmer will again ruine everything for the Project. Also how exacly Starlight Glimmer did it. Perhaps i write three short variables.
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okay then
nice alien reference you did there
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It was the best i could come up with how the Black Marker got to Equus. I must say, i had to throw two prior attempt away for it... Since i'm running out of time for the Sci-Fi contest this has to be it i guess
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i hear ya, i am struggling with alien too
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I just noticed the contest running 6... of Januar 2022...
Im stupid... Guess i have time after all writing this and my other storys for the contest... After all it's a month away
Quick question. What is your favorit Blueblood:
- Blue as typical Nobel, just a throw away character.
- Blueblood is a villain that need exterminating.
- Blueblood is outwards a typical Nobel but actually is a nice guy and worth of character development.
- Blueblood as romantic interesst with one of the above noticed characteristics?
O by the way. Can you send me a copy of our chatlog? Im feeling creative and would like to restart writing your requested juicy chapter.
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frankly, i never cared much about him but a friend likes the version of him being actually is a nice guy and worth of character development
you should probably look into getting an editor because while the premise is interesting, the grammar leaves something to be desired.
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I request it several times in the past. The best i get was the generous offer from users like:
- EmptyPlotFiller
- Al Burk
- GrandAdmiral MitthRawN
- Gambling_Sam
- DestoroyahZ
- SilverDiamond
- Bronycommander
This amazing guys/girls helped me a lot over time.
They helped me improve my english and it's structure more than i did in some of the year's i invested learning it on my own to enjoy Fimfiction ♡
- Airy Words , would be a professional that can be payed. I don't have the funds for that...
Enjoyed it for sure
liked it
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Thanks
I actually had something totaly different in mind to do but here i am... The Chapter of Nightmare and Luna on the moon need some edits now
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you're welcome and okay
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You'r most welcome to sent me grammar correction advice
Another chapter is ready but i have no time for grammar proof reading it. Should be like 99% ready
Anyway enjoy the current chapter
Stay cuddly and snuggel some of you'r fellows
Loved it, could not help but smile
Happy to hear. There will be more before Marksaline become a teen and later a adult. This is all the prequel before the main story. Noone can accuse me of pulling a Disney Starwars if i have a well established staff
Next chapter is mostly ready.
Unfortunately did i run out of proof readers do to the time of year. If i release it depends if i find the time to do it all by myself i guess.
The other storys of my Account need some proof reading and attention.
Not to forget that time for the contest is running short. One day at a time...
Your Grammar made this hard to read... Plz get a beta reader
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Otherwise it is very interesting and I think it has great potential