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good, I look forward to continuing
Dont get me wrong, i really like this concept but... what is this grammar!?? Where are the comas and the full stops? This is missing so much punctuation.
Im telling you this not because i want to hate on you or your editor, but because i want this story to succeed and be good.
A good tip i can give you is to write your chapters in google docs since its auto correct is really good at punctuation.
Btw, sick cover art ;>
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thanks, I promise to improve
Proofread? My guy, there are a lot of errors.
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Hi, I am the one responsible for the lack of punctuation in this story, I should've paid more attention when translating the story, I'm sorry that I made it harder to enjoy a very solid chapter with much potential, please give this story a chance it is worth the read... and L., sorry I let you down in this one man, I know you said you this fic was very important to you, I'll do my best not to let this happen again... once again, sorry.
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thank you very much and don't worry I know you've been busy just take it easier next time
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Dont worry my man, i would read this story with errors and all, but i am glad you will put some more effort into it. I believe this story can be great even with its flaws
Take your time, it makes the overall quality better as opposed to if you just burnt yourself out in 2 chapters :)
As someone suggested, Google docs is great to help with spelling etc, but used in combination with Grammerly (A free add on) you can usally get 99% of errors. Highly recommend that combo.