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Deamon_Castor


New to the channel, please be nice.

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Comment posted by texter deleted Jan 27th, 2023

All he needs now is a tall bent red and white top hat, and a pacifier? :trixieshiftright:

Did he just DDT the changelings? :twilightoops:

Taking a thousand years out just to catch up with the prefered timeline? He already screwed the pooch just being there, the best he can do is Foundation it out in the background,a nd for that, he needs time and resources. A Lot of it. :moustache:

BREATHE MAN BREATHE!!

Snark aside the story is too dense, you've crammed about twice as much content in half as many words.

1000 years before when he wants to be, planning to hibernate through it, conveniently will take just as long to get through the profanity filter. Seems to be setting himself up as the reason the everfree castle was abandoned, possibly also the reason luna was banished.

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DDT is an extremely nasty insecticide banned many years ago especially after the book Silent Spring.

I wonder how many hundred occupants there are in that castle, and where the farms are as Id have expected the forest would have to have hunters all through it running suupply lines to feed that place without farms unless theyre looking to leave soon because it cant actually supply even a slightly larger occupation rate?:twilightoops:

Great work you got here I like it

Gonna point this out, perhaps a different color for Celestia's text? if yer not using dark mode, it's basicly invisable

Will have a nice colection of top tier high power range spells ther to level grind, Observe and Integrate etc?

Is the Hibernation Chamber going to be marked with the symbol of Disturb on Wrath of Pink, a Cupcake? :pinkiehappy:

This will be intresting. Pinkie being challanged to fill the infinite stomach of a Slime Lord.

I forsee Neutronium Fruitcake.

Neutronium?

Yup, from her Neutronium Condensator Farm back home?:pinkiecrazy:

Thanks for the chapter! I love your story, I hope it continues for a long time.

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Do you mean like the flood from halo where it’s one mind they control the thousand bodies or like the geth were many minds can control one body

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Not quite like the flood. He split a bit off himself, he is connected but the mini slime does have a mind and soul of his own.

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So if he reabsorbs the mini slime did their minds become one or is it like a back up for an extra consciousness inside his head?

need more!

Jack meets the slime he created 1000 years ago

"Hello father, mother told me you would be helping today"

"nani??!"

"He's adorable isn't he Jack!"

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It's a mini slime meant for helping the princess, Jack may be a monster but he's not heartless to take it back on a whim. He can create thousands more if he has to.

Comment posted by Status L deleted Oct 31st, 2023

Author's Note:

Okay whoever said that writing is easy is BULLSHITTING!

11/12 authors agree.

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He got stabbed protecting his friend and the friend's girlfriend, but otherwise, yeah, kinda.

I really liked this story so far, despite the fact it gets overly wacky at times.

I look Gothard to reading more and wish you good health and good luck with your endeavors.

Just a suggestion but maybe ditch the colors or test them first. It’s a bit hard to read some of what you wrote when in both dark and light mode depending on the color.

Great story, can't wait for next chapter. Curious as to who he starts a relationship with, whether it be with a single pony or with a herd.

What just happened? I really hope it was a mistake with publishing a unfinished chapter like that.

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Yeah it was a slip of a finger, gonna try to work on it on my phone from now on.

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