• Member Since 27th Mar, 2022
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Kurookumera


Comments ( 9 )

Pretty good start can't wait for the next chapter

I love the intro. It's not they typical cookie cutter one, so you get points for that.

Looking forward to seeing more.

Monk
"not only was love blind but it must have some severe mental disorders too." -Recteik Shade

*reading chapter 1* at least the description is better than previous story. *finished chapter 1* but not a better 'chapter 1'

I like how he shut her up. Twilight tends to get stuck on one road especially when it comes to learning that she doesn't really notice anything else.

This is an interesting Fimfiction, can't wait to read more.

"I'm Applejack. Also don't cause trouble either or you will have me to answer to."

Hostile Applejack at first sight because cliché typical :ajbemused:

Twilight apparently was never taught basic manners when interacting with others which includes don't treat them like a science project without asking first.

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Not hostile. It was a warning. Being protective of friends is a common trait among people too.

Good story ^^ when come next chapter ? if i ask ?

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