Joseph found himself laying in a field of grass with a new body and gender. Aware of his new capabilities, how will his Fear trait help him through his new life?
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This seems like a good idea it's just the pacing is going a bit too fast but that may be intentional so all I can say is make sure that ferris has some sort of restraint
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Thank you for the advice. I wasn't sure if I was going too fast. I'll try and slow it down. Any tips you could share would also be appreciated.
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no problem also I had a question, isn't betty suppose to be bete because that's how it was spelled in glitchtale from what I can remember but maybe I'm remembering things wrong.
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I thought they gave them self the cover name of Betty while trying to blend in.
I hope to see more =)
Looks good
it a god story keep up the good work