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Gothic loli doctor octavius here we gooo!
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Hopefully I can carry this torch!
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Cute
You better do this one justice, or else!
Piece of advice.
Don't rewrite 29 chapters. If you want to redo a story, do something different and new. A reimagining, if you will. 98 percent of stories that a writer decided to rewrite....die. Here is why. when a writer writes something new, everyone is excited. The fans are excited, the writer is excited, everyone gives feedback. When a writer rewrites chapters.....no one cares. No one is excited, no one gives feedback. It goes from something fun, to.....its work and the story almost always dies. By the time the Author has rewritten 29 chapters, what that actually means is that he wrote 60 chapters and by that point, the Author is sick of the story. Nothing of actual value is created, he just regurgitated what was already there and he is almost always burned out on it.
To be clear, I'm not saying not to do it. I'm saying you have to be smart about it.
Monk
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I've been a fan of the og story for a long time and finally have had some time to attempt a rewrite to add detail and adjust some not so great choices from the original story. I'm hoping to add to the content of the story and make a new experience while keeping at least somewhat close to the original authors intentions for the story, I'm sure its gonna be a bit of a slog at first but I really enjoy the premise and characters of the original and hope to recreate that and expand on it as much as possible. Thank you for the advice though and I understand exactly what you mean, I don't expect this story to blow up I just want to be able to make a satisfying end to a great story.
Don’t make this a complete rewrite, as those tend to die rather fast. Put your own spin to it. Anyways good luck and I look forward towards the results.
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That's the plan, working off of what the original author wrote while changing aspects of the story, next chapter will hopefully be done in an hour or two and will hopefully show that I am attempting to expand in my own way
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Excellent work
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Hot damn, way faster than me when I wrote my fimfic. Keep up the work.
Great story keep up the good work
Fun cant wait for more.!
There's something called a paragraph, maybe you heard of it?
Dragged* drug is a whole other thing
You use names far too much author, vary it, use she/her describe the character like "the purple pony" "the yellow pegasus" "The fashionista" Always avoid repeating words
"and will never be found and is heartbreaking." You know author there's something like 'talking too much' and 'overly explaining' in histories, This is an example, the thought should have ended in "Lost" You extending the phrase only makes things awkward to read, you could write something like.
[ It felt like the child was lost, like she would never find her way again, the mere thought was heartbreaking]
A shame that you didn’t continue.
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Been having some personal issues, Hopefully I will be able to post the next chapter soon but life is abit chaotic right now.