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Hoofprintz
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This is really interesting so far, I like this darker approach to the ending of the show!
I will point out though that you misspelled "weird". It's supposed to have the 'e' before the 'i'.
That stupid brat had it coming.
Does she really expect to be the new "empress of friendship" when she took the very important magic that everybody heavily relies on!!??
I know that magic is gone, but I didn't expect for Ponykind to go technological advanced that freaking quickly!!??
I like the idea of ponies being so used to magic they felt there wasn't a need to delve into science all that much.
But it was always laying dormant, ready to be applied when magic couldn't do the job.
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Still, a child getting lynched and torn apart by a mob is still pretty horrifying.
I seems Equestrians lost more than their magic.
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Thanks for the comment and interest!
Also, I'm a doofus. Thanks for pointing that out, I'll run through and correct.
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I know right. I still don't know what she was expecting, everyone to just love her for some reason?
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I may have cheated a bit lol. I'll just say it's due to how ridiculously smart Twilight is.
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Agreed. A sort of complacency that they had to move on from once they were forced to.
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Yep. Little itty-bitty bits. There was a lot of anger there.
So, what even happened to the OTHER nations then? Did they bother to step in and offer aid, or did they seem to do the usual "Let Equestria go into chaos and watch the fireworks from afar"? More importantly, were the Student Six forced to leave or did they stay behind to help out?
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Very good questions that will be answered in time. Dash isn't exactly the type to care about that kind of stuff l, I think, so she didn't really address it.
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Thanks so much!
Nicely written
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Thank you! I really appreciate you reading and commenting!
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❤️
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Either that or Cozy just assumed that having friends made her powerful by default. Which isn't totally wrong. Except that Twilight was already a powerful unicorn before she ever had friends. Having them just bumped her powers up considerably.
Cozy didn't, being a Pegasus and all that. Children are also stupid like that, to be fair. Not always thinking things through.
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Lol yep I'll definitely agree Cozy was a stupid child... much like most kids.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Yikes, poor cozy.
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Maybe they were always like this and losing magic was the straw that broke the camels back.
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This could be true. Their true nature's finally came out.
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Either that or just stress.
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Lmao yeah, one or the other.
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Dude, I sometimes worry about you.
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Why do you think like that? Remember, Cozy's maybe a kid/brat. She made a very, very bad decision, and screwed pony society as they know it.
And she is still stupid to think that after what she did, she expect everypony to like her!?
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Villains have done worse. Plus she’s a kid. By your logic sunset shimmer, starlight glimmer, and other villains deserve the same treatment.
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This is true. The ramifications of what Cozy could have accomplished are insane. Unicorns become useless. Alicorn's become useless. The very fabric of Equestria changes.
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Starlight could have destroyed everything but had the wherewithal to pull back. Sunset literally almost destroyed another reality because of bringing magic to it. If the Dazzlings had taken over the human world and turned it into a mess, yeah Sunset might have deserved pretty bad punishment.
But I do agree with you. Cozy is hard to judge cause she's just a stupid child. Children should generally be punished a bit differently.
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Honestly, people just like treating sunset shimmer as a mary sue so much that I had to use her as an example.
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I feel like the lights are gonna screw them over.
But she’s reckless.
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imagine someone took Cozyglow's brain and then we can have G0llybot. After all, she accomplishes a lot for a kid, the brain must be smart and useful
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Thanks for the comment!
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*Looks around uncomfortably* What would make you think that? Also yep, Dash is the definition of reckless.
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That bot would end up trying to take over the world.
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The fact that they are praising it.
This is EPIC! Thank you for not regulating Starlight to a supporting character, and giving her the intelligence she had in seasons 5-8. Her and Twilight are an epic pairing, but I'd love to see more TwiDash as well, I think in such a situation they'd really be there for each other. Fluttershy and Pinkie are also a great duo when it comes to this stuff, and I like how there's characters who don't want to change. Though, I wouldn't be surprised if Fluttershy eventually cracked under the pressure of not being able to talk to animals anymore.
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Thank you so much for the comment!
I love Starlight. It's hard for me not to make her prominent.
The Mane 6 are going to be interacting a lot here so some of your suggestions are planned.
Again thank you!
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awesome! and ofc, i just have one question though, what happened to Spike?
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Spike is around in chapter...4? I think. He's still alive and will be doing things.
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This one was really engaging! Loved it
I swear the stakes get higher every entry! /gen. I'm really invested. Also love the RariJack! The TwiDash moments are so cute and they honestly make a lot of sense, because Rainbow Dash seems to feel like since Twilight gave her back flight, she owes her everything, and in some aspects, she does. They're also definitely the two with the most ability to get things done as a team besides Starlight. I'm scared but excited to see what she chooses, I love her as a character so I selfishly hope she chooses to stay around to protect her friends rather than to try and gain her flight back. Element of Loyalty not flight iykwim. Starlight's part was also really engaging as I said earlier, made me interested in her character arc as well. Overall, great job! Can't wait for what comes next.
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Tysvm for commenting!
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I'm so happy the story is resonating with you! I think Dash will always do what's best for her friends, no matter how difficult the choice. Hopefully it works out for her here.
jesus
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Chrys is a monster.
I feel so bad for MoonDancer
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Same.
Chrysalis will get what's coming to her... hopefully.
Nice to see someone acknowledging why AppleDash wouldn't realistically work.
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Yeah, I feel like that relationship would only go bad places.
Thanks for reading and for the comment!
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You're welcome! It's a very interesting story!
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Thank you very much! This story doesn't get too much attention so every comment means that much more to me!
It makes me very happy that it is finding at least a little niche for some people.
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You're welcome!
I believe the best part of the story as a whole is that even though it's M-rated and supposed to be graphic, it's written in a way that's not overwhelming. Especially for the Moondancer non-con scene, it was a relief that nothing was written with too much explicit detail since the implications were pretty disturbing on their own.
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I'm glad my intentions are coming through in the story. I don't want this to just be overly mature for the sake of being edgy so I do tone it down and try to rely more on... Implication is the word, I guess.