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Kuro

Kuro is a kitsune god who got seriously injured when defending a universe and was forced to retreat. Now he will live among the ponies and watch over them.

Chapters (3)

Arrival · 11th Jul 2023 · 1,126 words
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New place · 16th Jul 2023 · 1,087 words
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Bugs pt 1 · 23rd Jul 2023 · 567 words
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amastelaire

amastelaire #1 · Aug 4th, 2023 · · · Bugs pt 1 ·

The story is pretty good, but seem too fast-paced, maybe separate the dialogue more or go in more details?
Idk, I'm not a proffesional wriiter (same level of writing at best i guess), but the story is promising, can't wait for more!