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Crisis Novastar


Every thing that has a beginning has an end. I'm both the beginning and the end for I'm Ragnarok!

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The Kitsune Race has long been a myth. Stories about there act of mischievous, pranks, and at times lust. Now the leader of the Kitsune Race wants to meet with the princesses of Equestria to negotiate peace, trade, and an alliance among ponies and foxes.

How will the foxes content with pony lifestyle?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 23 )

Instead of "content" you probably mean "Contend" in the blurb bit

You know, everything they were worried about the Kitsune knowing, doesn't require a seer. All it requires is a newspaper prescription.

Its all common knowledge and in the paper.

Also, those Kitsune guards are the most undisciplined guards Ive ever seen. Running their mouths when they should keep quiet. One gave up a state secret, the other got insulted and prepared to attack a peace talk delegation. If I were the Emperor I would have had both those guards replaced and then killed.

The Monk
“A spider’s got to spider.” -Scarheart

Killing them may be overdoing it, Replacement and discipline ok. And The Emperor gave one of his guard permission to speak.

Only read chapter 1 so far. it's a nice story. nice to see i'm not the only one writing about kitsune OC's in Equestria. I'll defiantly be reading more

Does Spike play an important role in this story?

9689207
I do not think so, it's going to be everybody, and spike was with a problem that the ponies were killing him, he does not need enemies. now will Spike will attract lustful eyes and Seer or Gale will want to have some relationship ?!

:pinkiehappy: well like a felines enemies makes sense.

First of all, whats up the clothes thing? Second you can also call a female fox a bitch

9691103
I can but Kitsune have a fear and hatred of dogs even while in human form, and some become so rattled by the presence of dogs that they revert to the shape of a fox and flee.

In other words, Kitsune know there're apart of the dog family, they just don't want to be associated by them.

9689207
You do know Spike isn't the only one. There are others.


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As for a relationship. You have to wait.

I caught the references at the start to Vavacung's works.

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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When or if I find someone willing to help me out patten out ideas.

Well another good story that won't get finished.

Ok, sad ends like this when the ideas and narrative and I understand that you have to be horny and continue with the story and see where it goes

Comment posted by NasihaBrony deleted Jun 11th, 2020

Really great story, and I absolutely LOVE how the cover art looks

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