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Mancin
"Look upon the fields in which I grow my Fucks...and you will see that they are Barren..."
Mancin
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I'm liking where this is going. It was a little stilted at the start, but it's flowing better now.
Eagerly awaiting the main event!
No credits for that cover image?
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Burstfire
Definitely an interesting premise... though the adjustment period when Sunset gets back may be rough. Still, looking forward to more.
The whole “explain the world” feels so forced. Twilight is vary ooc there while still showing a glimmer of the former pony. Twight is dead, Sunset is dying and soon only Bimbo Sunset will remain. The horror elements are blended well into the porn.
I wonder if in a month just how much of old Sunset will resurface? Even if toned down I think she would, at least, remain a slut once back in her normal world.
11284829
Fixed!
Let's see how the month ends!!, Especially when she's back on the other side!!
Update when
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This Friday, the 6th.
11293448
8th you mean 6th was Wednesday
11293563
Right! I knew that!
Bummed it ended so early
I agree whit 11295549. I thought their would be two more chapters one meeting and posably having fun whit Celestia and the last chapter beeing the return home and CHS reaktion to the new Sunset.
11295761
yeah that first chapter made a lot of set up for it all to end just two chapters after.
Will we have a sequel to this? I loved
Very abrupt ending, and a hesitance to go into the details past a certain point. Still, I hope you do more with the setting.
I appreciate the attempt, but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't a little bummed by the end result. All that build up, and then you finally get to the main thrust of my request, and then... almost nothing.
Still, the effort is appreciated. Good luck on your future writing endeavors!
11297142
Understood. Once I get some free time, I will expand on the story, but I can't give you a firm deadline. I see many commenters voicing the same opinion, and my readers are very important to me, but as this was your request I was waiting for your feedback.
I'll try to make it before the end of the month.
OWO
Really hope this gets continued!
this looks like it could go on longer as sunset dives deep into the perverse universe
It was really hot, but I'm sorry I had to down vote it because the first two chapters built up the scene with Shinning Armor but when the time came, there was almost no payoff.
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Oh, you want PAYOFF?! I'LL give you PAYOFF! Hot, sticky, sloppy payoff...with the New, Expanded® Version!
11504369
Haha, OK. Imma get breakfast then I'll read it.
I'll withdraw my down-vote for now.
11504369
That would be appreciated