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libertydude


Aspiring writer, Steve Magnet disciple

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One week before Hearth's Warming, Celestia appears in Pinkie's home. She wants her help to retrieve a gift for her sister Luna, and she knows Pinkie is just the mare to get it.

The only problem is that the gift happens to be a cursed cookie recipe locked away by an evil sorceress deep under a mountain.


Written for Hey It's That Pony for Jinglemas 2022.

Takes place three years after the Season 9 finale (Twilight becoming the sole ruler).

Rated T for a little frightening imagery and talk of death.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 3 )

MOOOOOOOOORE!!!!

Sorry it took me so long to sit down and read this.

This was fantastic! Exactly what I was hoping for.
This was a fun pairing. Good choice!

I thought that you would reveal that the picture that Pinkie took would have the recipe after the curse had been undone, but I think I agree that the moral of the story was much better delivered the way you did it.

Thank you very much for the story.

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You're welcome! This story was tough to write, not just for the length, but because it took me a while to decide on a concept. I originally planned to do a Pinkie/Limestone team-up where they searched for the recipe, but it was so comedic that I thought it ruined the adventurous tone I figured you wanted. I then changed it to Pinkie/Celestia and toned down the comedy (Pinkie provides enough comedic relief by herself), as well as tying Luna into the story. I actually had the revelation that Celestia was trying to relive her youth with Luna at the beginning, but I realized it'd have more impact if it was revealed by Kalamandra in the climax.

In the end though, I'm glad I wrote this and that you enjoyed it. Jinglemas always seems to push me in creative directions, and this story, while hard to write, was still fun to do.

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