Bummed it ended so early

I agree whit 11295549. I thought their would be two more chapters one meeting and posably having fun whit Celestia and the last chapter beeing the return home and CHS reaktion to the new Sunset.

11295761
yeah that first chapter made a lot of set up for it all to end just two chapters after.

Will we have a sequel to this? I loved

Very abrupt ending, and a hesitance to go into the details past a certain point. Still, I hope you do more with the setting.

I appreciate the attempt, but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't a little bummed by the end result. All that build up, and then you finally get to the main thrust of my request, and then... almost nothing.

Still, the effort is appreciated. Good luck on your future writing endeavors!

11297142
Understood. Once I get some free time, I will expand on the story, but I can't give you a firm deadline. I see many commenters voicing the same opinion, and my readers are very important to me, but as this was your request I was waiting for your feedback.

I'll try to make it before the end of the month.

OWO

Really hope this gets continued!

this looks like it could go on longer as sunset dives deep into the perverse universe

It was really hot, but I'm sorry I had to down vote it because the first two chapters built up the scene with Shinning Armor but when the time came, there was almost no payoff.

11348634
Oh, you want PAYOFF?! I'LL give you PAYOFF! Hot, sticky, sloppy payoff...with the New, Expanded® Version!

11504369
Haha, OK. Imma get breakfast then I'll read it.
I'll withdraw my down-vote for now.

11504369
That would be appreciated