I'm liking where this is going. It was a little stilted at the start, but it's flowing better now.

Eagerly awaiting the main event!

No credits for that cover image?

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Burstfire

Definitely an interesting premise... though the adjustment period when Sunset gets back may be rough. Still, looking forward to more.

The whole “explain the world” feels so forced. Twilight is vary ooc there while still showing a glimmer of the former pony. Twight is dead, Sunset is dying and soon only Bimbo Sunset will remain. The horror elements are blended well into the porn.

I wonder if in a month just how much of old Sunset will resurface? Even if toned down I think she would, at least, remain a slut once back in her normal world.

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Fixed!

Let's see how the month ends!!, Especially when she's back on the other side!!

Update when

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This Friday, the 6th.

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8th you mean 6th was Wednesday

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Right! I knew that!