Hi. It's gapty. Read a fic today. Or don't. They're both the same to me. Just don't tell knighty I said that.
After many hours of training and perfecting their singing, the Dazzlings were excited to fulfill their wish of becoming a successful and popular band.
Everything starts small though, so they went on a tour to become more famous. The first city: Canterlot.
But why are people so... reluctant towards them?
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Need a sequal. Human Dazzling vs Siren Dazzling.
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I like to see how the Rainbooms are handling their huge FUBAR they made, this is pretty funny but sad as well.
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Damn right.
This needs to be a full story.
Wonder if Human Sunset can fit in all of this?
Huh, I've always wondered what their counterparts story would be. Now I'm invested but it is marked complete
Really well written for a first site publication, nice.
I orignally thought "Well wouldn't the dazzling's counterparts be dead? Living a thousand years ago like when the Dazzlings first showed up?" Then I rembered Celestia and Luna and all doubts disapeared.
and that why and how it all started of how the human dazzling's became real sirens on their path to revenge against the rainbows and "sirens" shams that ruined their dream and lives!
Hah! Love stories where the 'heroes' are the ones holding the idiot ball.
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A sequel is planned, but I have so far no idea how it will play out. Once a good plot is thought of then a sequel will be made
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She could be friends with the human Dazzlings and plan with them the mastermind revenge
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The war has begun
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Nothing better than heroes making only more enemies
Thank you all for the comments!
Hope that in their quest for revenge, the Human Dazzling does not go down a very dark path.
Although there are several dark force wielders that the Dazzling can make contact with should they have the resources.
P.s. They called lawyers.
This was both really silly, but also teeth-gritting and frustrating.
I hope the Siren Dazzlings get their due and the Rainbooms pay the Human Dazzlings back for ruining their careers.
This was both funny and frustrating. Great story.
Dang, I wanted to get in there to put some senses into our "heroes" before the last part. And that's good ! Means it got me invested in the story. I'm curious to see what a sequel would be.
Identity theft is no joke.
Surely those destiny-leashed Rainbooms will have what's coming to them in a sequel, right?
OUCH! Definitely felt bad for the Dazzlings' human world counterparts here. That major case of mistaken identity that, unfortunately, DID NOT get resolved peacefully, is certainly going to come back to bite the Rainbooms in the rear really hard. You would have thought that Sunset's touch telepathy would have cleared up the mess much more quickly and easily (i.e. she could have scanned the minds of any of the Human Dazzlings and gotten the truth before a single punch was thrown). And the end cameo with the Dazzlings we are more familiar with was a great touch.
Still, I appreciate you going to the effort here and yeah, here's hoping the human world Dazzlings don't try anything nastier than calling their lawyers. That would be the BEST revenge as it is completely legal and stays within the realms of what is completely justified.
Very much looking forward to a sequel.
Great oneshot man the Rainbooms really dropped the ball. Any chance to see a sequel with sirens and even rainbooms getting some karma for this incident?
The Rainbooms really messed up BIG time all because they jumped to conclusions thinking they were the same Dazzlings who mind controlled the school.
Also this needs a sequel where the Human Dazzlings get payback on the Siren Dazzlings.
please do a sequel another chapter on the story where the Rainbooms get their comeuppance.
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A sequel is planned, it's just that I need to think of how exactly the human Dazzlings will try to get their revenge/get all back etc.
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But lawyers are boring
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I even felt the frustration and bad for them, but still made them suffer through it. Guess I'm turning evil?
Thanks again for all the comments!
Magic Lawyer, maybe Sombra.
Because of the rampant Equestria stuff littered on Earth due to Starswirl, there got to be somebody to clean up the mess.
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If it's about controlling the rampant things in Equestria spread on Earth due to Starswirl, it's most likely that S.M.I.L.E (human) were responsible, take the "Friendship Games" events for example, someone must have covered up all that. There are even other fan fics in which they theorize that Tirek, Chrysalis and Cozy Glow from the other side of the mirror are part of the organization. There are also characters like King Sombra or Discord who could be included in a sequel, or at a much lower level, the parents of the Dazzlings.
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This demands vendetta.
My best advice is to develop your story as you see fit, you had a great start that caught the attention of many and it is not easy at all, you have the opportunity to develop a good story if you know how to give it a good focus, prioritize the quality of the story before the size of the story. They have many characters that you could add and suggest ideas in the comments. I just look forward to your future story at a time you think is right.
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I object to that ! Exibit 1 : Ace Attorney Trilogy. Exibit 2 : The Great Ace Attorney Chronicles.
Lawyering can be fun... especially if way, way over the top
Nice story. Hope to read more from you.
Damn, that was really good. I always thought did the Dazzling's have human counterparts and what would happen if they met, well I know know, and damn it sucks. (I promise to do better at leaving comments at the end of your stories
) Plus, great job on killing it with your first story!