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AtomicClop
Because "fantasy erotica" sounds better than "cartoon horse porn."
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Fantastic fic. Funny and hot at the same time. And more Startrixburst antics are always great to see.
You know, as I was reading this and got the the orgasm denial spell, I was JUST starting to think to myself, "Man, this is a pretty common porn trope, it'd be nice to see it subverted by a level of orgasm so powerful that it breaks through the denial spell," and then lo and behold you go exactly there. Extra credit there for you, nicely done.
Kind of weird and mean to stick Spike in there just to run the music and otherwise have no involvement whatsoever, though. You'd think any of the five highly-skilled magic users in the room could handle it fine without him.
Oh well, more good than bad here at least. Thumbs up.
--CG
I love that album. It's even better than 3 (although not quite as good as 4).
This is actually a refreshing take on Spike's character.
Enjoyable -- although you'll want to go back and double-check your text, since I did spot a few typos here and there.
Kinda weird seeing that right after a chess tournament and being like, "FIDE Master?"
At least it wasn't a Prench bakery this time (also, seems Shining is still scared of coconut butter).
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Excuse you; we prefer the term bratty sub.
I don't usually read porn, but no guarantees on me reading this, but I just want to say I really appreciate the concept and it's always nice to see more consensual bdsm!
Ominous Chanting 5: The Rechantening isn't bad, but nothing's quite captured the magic of Now That's What I Call Chanting! 3.
I suppose with Rarity it was more about the romantic fantasy than anything more... moist.
Cadance's attire and Trixie's heresy are both amazing.
"What about Sandbar?"
"We schedule things very carefully."
Wonderful contrast between consensual depravity and intrusive hilarity. Great work all around.
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Thanks!
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Breaking the spell seemed like a nice aversion
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I'll look back for the typos. Glad you enjoyed otherwise.
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Coconuts. Why did it have to be coconuts.
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Ha!
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Thanks! "Quesadillas" was originally the safeword, but I decided it was better as a heresy.
Awesome! Thoroughly enjoyed.
Love me some startrixburst, and everyone else being there for as just icing on the cake
If this is what Trixie gets on regular birthday, then I wonder how they are going to top that for her Golden Jubilee? ^^
This is one of the best parodies of porn I have ever read but it's giving me heavy for the 40K buys when you talk about slanesse
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Honestly I've never read 40K; was parodying more Yoon Ha Lee's Machineries of Empire. (I parody because I love; my favorite series written since Honor Harrington.)
Excellent fic, well done, approved by State, now go to horny gulag, you degenerate.
This made me laugh so hard!
P.S. Pineapple is the best pizza topping.
Not bad, not bad. I wouldn’t call it an exceptionally great clopfic, but I also have no real complaints. Parts of it were pretty silly, but it obviously wasn’t supposed to be taken seriously anyway.
There were also some really nice touches to it. Great use of not everything going perfectly— such as Sunburst not being erect at first, or failing to fully penetrate. And you made good use of everybody there, while still keeping the focus on Trixie — nobody felt forgotten or extraneous, and they all had something unique to do that affected Trixie. I especially liked the novel idea that Cadance’s anti-orgasm spell couldn’t contain the force of Trixie’s orgasm and broke, rather than being dispelled. That’s a concept I’ve never seen before, and it’s really sexy.
I guess if I was to have a complaint, it would be the relative lack of emotion in the story. The main one being expressed was just frustration, which isn’t a very sexy emotion. There could have been more about Trixie getting deep into the fantasy, especially getting into how she feels about the “purplesmart goddess”. Or even at a non-fantasy level, how she feels about her fuckbuddies Starlight and Sunburst. Or maybe how she feels about Gallus suddenly showing up if she was not expecting that, had never been intimate with him before, and was now about to be “raped” by this griffon student she barely knows. Those kinds of deeper emotional undertones are what could maybe have taken this clopfic from good to great.
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Those are excellent points, thank you for the feedback!