• Published 7th Apr 2022
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Bi, Bi, Bi My Darling - Justice3442



Sunset Shimmer and Sour Sweet engage in a friendly competition. Very friendly.

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“أنتما الاثنان استيقظتا بجانب بعضكما لكن بخير,” Chrysi mumbled to herself.

Google Translate again: You two woke up next to each other but okay

“اللهم امين,” Chrysi uttered as she smahsed a palm against her face.

A simple "Amen"; we don't use that as an expletive in English but I don't actually know Arabic.

“Oh, nos!” Justice said between licks. “Written reality is falling apart!”

Yes, that's what happens when a self-insert and a major character get married.

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Your translations are dead on. Chrysi said the Islamic equivalent to "Amen", "Praise Allah".

11276535
Again, I literally just copy-pasted into Google Translate. Thank whoever invented that.

As an aside, your self-insert's color is perfect for a diegetic reference to Bubble Berry. Because male Pinkie Pie.

“Pilfer life from ocean,” quipped Tree Hugger.

Fish, and plankton, and sea greens, and protein from the sea.

Realization hit Sunset, “Right, I’m supposed to be getting laid right now."

Oh good, you remembered. I honestly wasn't sure. Honestly, it feels like your characters are just kind of slopping from story to story with lip service paid to the intended plot amid the same incoherent chaos. A little more focus would be appreciated.

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