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Justice3442


Horrifically Fun

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I admire or respect (or probably both!)) how this story's first line lets us know what we're in for.

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The homophobic comment hate on this site is amazing (in a bad way). :applejackunsure:

.Chrysi mumbled ,"مطعمي أجمل بكثير على أية حال"

I Google Translated so you don't have to: "My restaurant is much nicer anyway". Makes sense given the context.

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It is somewhat amazing, right? I mean, a sizeable amount of the stories are about the characters falling in love or having relationships with someone of the same gender, and there's plenty about one or two males being in a group sex situation with multiple females, but as soon as a label is applied to someone there's a bunch of people up in arms.

Sunset sat triumphantly in a chair like I was her throne.

Freudian slip? :raritywink:

This looks like it'll be absolute madness. I'll have fun watching it unfold.

This was a really fun read! I'm excited for more!
Also,

Sour Sweet locked eyes with D.H. Or rather, did her best to lock her eyes with one or the other of D.H.s. “Wanna hate fuck?”

was just... the exact right kind of hot. Love the casualness of the sexuality!

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It might be that the majority of ragers are literally too stupid to realize that two women having sex is lesbian unless the word "lesbian" is actually used.

To be fair, if the downvote legion is primarily automated then this would be unironically accurate. And I suspect that it might be for exactly this reason.

High gonna continue with the button mash universe stuff

“أنتما الاثنان استيقظتا بجانب بعضكما لكن بخير,” Chrysi mumbled to herself.

Google Translate again: You two woke up next to each other but okay

“اللهم امين,” Chrysi uttered as she smahsed a palm against her face.

A simple "Amen"; we don't use that as an expletive in English but I don't actually know Arabic.

“Oh, nos!” Justice said between licks. “Written reality is falling apart!”

Yes, that's what happens when a self-insert and a major character get married.

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Coming here from the future: the next chapter has a cameo.

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Your translations are dead on. Chrysi said the Islamic equivalent to "Amen", "Praise Allah".

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Again, I literally just copy-pasted into Google Translate. Thank whoever invented that.

As an aside, your self-insert's color is perfect for a diegetic reference to Bubble Berry. Because male Pinkie Pie.

“Pilfer life from ocean,” quipped Tree Hugger.

Fish, and plankton, and sea greens, and protein from the sea.

Realization hit Sunset, “Right, I’m supposed to be getting laid right now."

Oh good, you remembered. I honestly wasn't sure. Honestly, it feels like your characters are just kind of slopping from story to story with lip service paid to the intended plot amid the same incoherent chaos. A little more focus would be appreciated.

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