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Nico-Stone Rupan


Kiss Me, I'm Romanian! (Not Really)

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This story is a sequel to Sour Sweet Scrappers


You get a call from Sour Sweet in the middle of the night ordering you to get over to her house right away. Expecting late-night snuggles, you instead end up with pillow talk concerning the state of your relationship up to this point as well as its future.

Cover Art by Kul

(Sex tag for off-screen fun times)

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Okay, at first I thought what was with that intro but when I realized it was just a dream I cracked up. Actually, pretty much all of this story was funny. Oh, and happy Mother's Day to all of the mothers out there!

Like mother like daughter....
Oh god i have the mental image of sour sweet bitter honey the talk in the most kinky and traumatic way possible

Just loved it! So,are they two getting married?

7198517 Only time will tell...

7198520 I like to visualize you reading comments of anticipation and saying to yourself said post of yours like this:

Huh. I have to assume Sour told Perspective Character about Bitter Honey at some point before this story. Otherwise, there are some weird, quasi-psychic shenanigans taking place. I'm all for such shenanigans, but they don't seem particularly probable in this case.

Also, Mrs. Sweet is fantastic.

“The Great and Powerful Trixie demands that Cinch be burned at the stake!”

I couldn't breath right for a good fifteen minutes because of this :rainbowlaugh: Thanks I needed a good laugh

Okay, either Sour Sweet is a transmitting telepath or Bitter Honey isn't a hallucination at all but a possible future echoing back down the time-line thanks to all the holes Twilight punched in reality a few months back.

Meanwhile, Sour and Anon really need to find somewhere they can meet where they can be relatively assured that a parental figure won't walk in on them at any moment!:derpyderp1:

Imagine Sour Sweet´s face when her boyfriend tells her about their common acquaintance "Bitter Honey" .

That duct tape bit though
:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Sour has definitely been hanging with some extreme feminists on-line. Sunny Flare's disposition is closer to my heart.

I got a shout out. Yay! :pinkiehappy:
That T. Hoof thing is mine

There it is! Another one for the favorites! I absolutely LOVE this series of yours, and am looking forward to where it goes!

kul

You know, at somepart I regret cutting 10% of the original canvas width in my Sai, since I initially wanted to include a nondescript body indicating that someone else is sleeping there, but I thought that silhouette wont be relevant due to the story would be focusing on Sour again, instead on the boyfriend.

Also, I dont know about you, but I think Second Person is quite a character now. He's no longer that blank shy guy that we know in first fic, and Im kinda rooting for him now ^^. I want to see more of him and maybe the Narrative Family as a whole, but I think it may goes beyond his initial role in this story, to be a vessel for yall to inject yourself in it...
Unless we dont take it too seriously and then we can be introduced with his serious and ponderful older brother First Person (expy of Kira Yagami) and then the analytical and super-perceptive younger brother, Third Person (expy of typical narrator)

I love this story!:heart:

7198763 It's the same for me at this point, honestly. The 'Second' has taken on a life of his own and I gotta say I'm cheering him on in my mind. Go go go, solid relationship man! I believe in the two of you and what you can make together!

Why did you make Sour Sweet's daughter look exactly like her? ...The little girl in the picture is her daughter, right?

“Sour, is something wrong?”

“JUST GET OVER HERE, BUSTER!!!”

Oh crap what did I do!?

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Because, she is a hallucination, and hallucinations for the most part are reflections of our past experiences. Essentially, this is herself when she was little.

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Why did you make Sour Sweet's daughter look exactly like her? ...The little girl in the picture is her daughter, right?

Life's full of mysteries, ain't it? :ajsmug:

All eyes turn to the bespectacled girl crying exaggeratedly in the witness stand.

I imagine Twilight crying like this.
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You're my inspiration for Second Person stories.

Honey Bitter's real-life existence is all but guarantied now.

By the way, are you going to address the one creature from Sour Sweet's latest hallucination that wouldn't look at her sometime in the future?

God I love these stories. Always makes work days a little more enjoyable

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By the way, are you going to address the one creature from Sour Sweet's latest hallucination that wouldn't look at her sometime in the future?

It was a manifestation of her father's neglect, just as the boyfriend implied.

I'm going to start calling this character Second Person from now on.

"Don’t be afraid of duct tape, dear. It makes it so much more exciting, trust me!” She lets off what sounds to be a nostalgia-filled sigh. “Like mother, like daughter.”

:twilightoops:

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“Innocent!” Cinch states.

“I’m pretty sure that I heard guilty!” you happily declare. “Cinch, I hereby sentence you to… CUPCAKES!!!!!”

All of a sudden, a portal opens up in the middle of the courtroom. On the other side, the sight of an awaiting Pinkamena Diane Pie comes into view. She’s all suited up securely in a straightjacket and mouth restraint mask while being strapped onto a dolly. Two pony royal guards are even at each side of her. Officers Indigo and Rainbow once again take hold of Cinch and toss her right in. The entire courtroom erupts in thunderous applause.
She is soooooo dead.:pinkiecrazy:
“Sour, we’re going to work now,” Mrs. Sweet’s voice is heard from behind the locked door. “And honey, please remember that when you have your boyfriend over to try to keep your screams of pleasure down. You’re lucky your dad’s such a heavy sleeper. Don’t be afraid of duct tape, dear. It makes it so much more exciting, trust me!” She lets off what sounds to be a nostalgia-filled sigh. “Like mother, like daughter.”
Duck tape:rainbowhuh:? DUCK TAPE:twilightoops:!? NOOOOO WAY:ajbemused:! (That would be creepy as hell)

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Duck tape:rainbowhuh:? DUCK TAPE:twilightoops:!? NOOOOO WAY:ajbemused:! (That would be creepy as hell)

One person's creepy is another person's kinky :duck:

“Does… does it creep you out that I sometimes think that we’re… you know… married and have a little girl…?”

My reaction would have been:
"No, I think that's sweet actually. The fact that I just dreamt the exact same thing! THAT creeps me out a little."

Oh my cinnamon roll! You Sour Sweet series makes my heart flutter. It gives me hope for humanity!:raritycry:

7200529 0_0 .........:unsuresweetie: r u sure bout that?

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0_0 .........:unsuresweetie: r u sure bout that?

You don't know much about fetishes, do you?

I do. My friend said that he wanted to answer. I told him not to say anything stupid.:ajbemused:

Don’t be afraid of duct tape, dear. It makes it so much more exciting, trust me!

I fell off my chair after reading this, while holding my stomach from all the laughter.
Keep up the awesome work.

when is the next sequel coming out:pinkiehappy:

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when is the next sequel coming out:pinkiehappy:

*Lazily shrugs* :applejackunsure:

“How many times do I have to tell you? I hate when you make corny word plays with my name.”
“Don't lie. It's your secret turn-on.”

I did say that didn't I? :eeyup:

“And honey, please remember that when you have your boyfriend over to try to keep your screams of pleasure down. You’re lucky your dad’s such a heavy sleeper. Don’t be afraid of duct tape, dear. It makes it so much more exciting, trust me!” She lets off what sounds to be a nostalgia-filled sigh. “Like mother, like daughter.”

:rainbowderp: Uh, thanks for the advice mum? :unsuresweetie:
7198972 I approve of your reflexes, a suitable skill we all as men must learn :rainbowdetermined2:

Wow, Sour's mom is such a chill person.

I don't know if it's a remnant of magic from the Equestrian Games or a really adorable premonition but having '2nd Person'(Nice touch of meta humor at the start there) dream of Bitter Sweet just makes it this piece oh so fun to read.

Especially the bit where the character had to jog in his PJs:rainbowlaugh:

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Nico needs to name him already! Something with the word perspective in it!

Oh sweet Celestia yes! Another one knocked right out of the park! My only gripe is that I was looking forward to Second's reaction to the selfie he got from Sour Sweet after the Gilda fight... Still a super awesome addition though. Thanks for another awesome chapter!

7211613 Tell you what, we'll make the joke you posted on Scrappers be the official reaction:

"A text? I wonder what she wants t- OH MY GOD! THE DUCK LIPS JUST MAKE IT WORSE!"

That's way funnier than anything I could have come up with.

Also, Kul's head canon is that the boyfriend immediately grabbed a First-Aid kit afterwards and ran to Fluttershy's house to help clean her up, so we'll go with that chivalry as well :twilightsmile:

7212359 Whoa, thank you!

That ending though

You, my good sir, are absolutely fantastic. And also, I hate you. This fic just made me want Bitter Honey even more :applecry:
Sadly, I like y'all too much to hate you for very long. :facehoof:
Mate, you gotta give me your secret, how do you keep doing this?! How?! Continually finding new and awesome ways of expanding the story, it's fantastic, just fantastic! :pinkiehappy: It's such a privilege to watch the story grow :twilightsmile:
Yours,
~Spirit

7215930 My secret is that Sour Sweet puts me in a headlock as I write. She is a very demanding muse. Also, tacos. Lots and lots of tacos. Just as the wise Sonata always said... :trollestia:

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Yikes :rainbowderp: *backs up slowly*
Tacos! :pinkiesmile: I love tacos! I don't get to have them very often, sadly... but they are sooo goood :twilightsmile:

I wish I could double like this! :rainbowkiss:

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