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Nico-Stone Rupan
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Nico-Stone Rupan
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I was thinking the same thing when I read it.
Her arms shoot up to wrap around your neck and her legs wrap around your waste. I'm sure you meant Waist.
I like to say that this is the first Shadowbolt clopfic that has been done on this site. Good job.
And I like how she sticks it to Gilda.
7009097 Yeah, I did. Just corrected it, thank you!
New Sour Sweet fic? By Nico-Stone? NSFW?! THE ONE THAT HE HYPED UP LIKE LAST WEEK?!
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DIS
GONNA
B
GUD
Great shit, but you fucked up at the end. You forgot this:
"Guess who I just had sex with, darling!"
"...Me. It's 2 in the morning. Come back to bed, I need cuddles."
Nice.. I would be lying If I say that I didnt expect it to end this way, but damn, you did a very nice job at it!
You beautiful son of a bitch. Love everything about this. 10/10.
This was vey good. The scene fit her personality so well and the ending was hilarious
Yes yes yes! So funny yet so touching! Good job sir!
Loved the ending, lost it when she called her mom by accident. I hope to see more stories about Sour Sweet in the future.
I just sort of skimmed through this chapter; more than anything else I want to see this new symptom you keep talking about and how they deal with it. Frankly, I'm almost too scared to click the "Next" button.
So the symptom that comes after sex is babbling about it? Well, I can see how that can be a problem, but it doesn't really measure up to whatever it was I've been building myself up for. Still, it'll be interesting to see what sort of drama will result from this; I can imaging that "You" wouldn't take kindly to his girlfriend telling everyone about their sex life.
7010909 Terrifying hallucinations are what she newly developed, as were set up in Chapter 1. At the end of Chapter 2, she freaked out over the possibility that her entire first time may have just been all in her mind. After she had to be calmed down, sleep on it, and realize that it was indeed real, Chapter 3 was basically just a humorous epilogue since she was so happy.
Next time, please don't skim.
You know, I'd figure that out of the 5, Lemon would definitely not be a virgin.
Also, if Sour's parents have their heads on, they will not punish her, seeing that this experience is another important step in their daughter's emotional development. Though I wouldn't be surprised to see them return at 4 am with shouting. Prepare an escape rout, or be a man and stand your ground.
Once again I'm astounded at the lovely little moments you keep bringing.
Feed me more of your horse words.
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Certainly, but they're more like multi-colored high school student words
Really good! So, since they've finally done it, does that mean these stories will end?
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7012154 While I do consider this story to be a good stopping point, I am still going to try to write more about Sour Sweet. There are one or two things that were mentioned in the previous stories that will eventually be explored... if my brain juices ever develop a full plot about them, that is...
This is not good... This is not great... This is...THIS THE BEST STRING OF FICS I HAVE EVER READ!
So...cookies were what pushed her over the edge...
I couldn't have called that.
This chapter killed me. Adorkable excited Sour Sweet is best Sour Sweet.
"The End" at the end. Makes me sad. I really love this little group of clips from Sour Sweet ' s life.
7012334 Oh I can definitely understand brain juice
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Students are delicious it's true...
Oh, wow. That's... wow.
That's a sobering thought. And a really dramatic (as in, emotionally moving) and touching sentiment for Sour Sweet to express.
Very nice, author.
Dat ending:
Cx Lol. Brilliant story mate, can't wait to see more. *nudge* ^-^ 'cuz there will be more, riiiight? ^-^ Please?
~SoDF
7016437 Wwwweeeelllll, since you did say 'please'........... eh, why not?
7016462
Yes!! ^-^ Woohoo~
You're seriously the only person on this site I've seen that has done Sour Sweet even halfways decent. Since she's not a super common character, most people don't even bother with her, or even know of her existence, which is depressing. I love how you voice her, every single time. I'm glad this isn't the end of just about the greatest character development in all of Equestria ^-^ Thank you!!
7016462 I'm with SpiritofDancingFlames. I NEED MORE OF THIS! Sour Sweet is adorible in this and your writing is very good! IF YOU DON'T KEEP WRITING THIS I WILL LOSE IT! Just kidding! OR AM I?!
7016469 Dito!
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I think you mean *SpiritOfDancingFlames, and I think you also meant Sour Sweet, not Sour Sweat, eheh.. ^-^'
7021433 Sorry I tend to type faster than my brian thinks if that makes sense. Sometimes I make typos as a result.
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^-^ Yup, my Brian tends to leave me from time to time, too.
7022139 Arg!!! "Brain" Bloody Tartarus I did it again while critizizing myself for it!
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I... Am... Dying.
7022406 OH SON OF A WINDIGO GAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
.........
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I could mention the proper spelling of Wendigo, but I'm too busy rolling on the floor, laughing myself to death.
So, is there a sequel? I saw a comment and you answered. Soo... Here have a like and a follow.
Best wishes!
7023231 Thanks for the follow! As long as I can keep coming up with logical progressions, this is an ongoing series.
Wow, this reminds me so much of a "Sour Sweet having sex" image I saw on Derpibooru. In a good way.
7023905 I read your prequels prior to this, I really like how you did all these. I wish to see more.
I wish you well!
I have to hand it to you, you really captured my condition in your work. It is horrific to be forced to question whether or not what you experience day to day is real. Mood Swings and Delusions are less frightening and far easier to control. Thank you again, for making a story that can show others how the condition truly is. Kudos to you, keep writing!
7026953 I'm so thankful to hear that I'm getting it right. Your opinion is the one that I most value on this whole site. Doing the research and writing these stories has truly given me a lot of respect for what you and others have to go through. Please don't ever hesitate to tell me if I get anything inaccurate ( because I'm certainly not perfect ).
If you really, really need to picture Sour's Boyfriend, what would he looks like? What would his name be? Would it be funny if his name is "Second Persons" or "Just You" ? Just asking y'know... not am I planning anything *whistles nonchalantly*
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You sneaky little...
Alright, I've always pictured him having blue skin, green eyes, and tad-longish black hair kind of in the style of George Miller AKA Filthy Frank's True Self: https://v.cdn.vine.co/r/videos/A265FA4E221254745084004638720_463cc04ca2a.0.2.6560790571981404209.mp4.jpg?versionId=WwSUkmk3I.snC0G2RHHIi4cNdQm4ptD1
"Second Persons" is incredibly brilliant
Perfect.
She told her mom XD
7022558 Actually, he has it right. 'Windigo' is used in the show. Clearly pronounced with an 'I', though I'd have to turn the DVD subtitles on to be 100% certain. Wendigo is the traditional spelling, certainly, but the weather pun for creatures that live in ice storms was apparently too easy for the DHX guys to pass up.
Also, seeing as nobody else has done it yet, I will.
Start the clock, ladies and gents. Thirty minutes, you heard the man!
- Headwind