My daughter always wanted to be fastest flyer. She wanted to reach for the stars, to go wherever the breeze took her, but first she had to learn how to fly.
This is how my little girl flew away from me.
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Smoking Gun
Guy who writes stories when he's bored. And hey, I've got nothing else to do.
Smoking Gun
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That... was beautiful.
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Seriously, that hit me right in the feels.
"He tiny wings"? I'll edit this comment when I (hopefully) finish this chapter.
There were a couple of mixed up pronouns and redundancies, but other than that, a beautifully written story. Great job! :D
"off"
Should be a comma.
"would be considered bare bones" would sound better.
DOUBLE POST DEMON!!
I thought she never heard of Daring Do before "Read It And Weep?"
I don't usually edit stories like this, but this... this was amazing. Truly beautiful. Fix those minor derps and send it to EqD, my friend.
Huge props, very well done and heart warming.
Excelent work. cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-wclap.png
That was genuinely heartfelt.
Principal is the person. Principle is the concept.
Even so, I really enjoyed it. I loved the insight into her past, how she wasn't always the best but still felt like the same Rainbow.
Also,
was a great line.