Club Harmony is the hottest new joint in all of Equestria. Owned by Octavia Philharmonica and Vinyl Scratch, Club Harmony has become famous for its mixture of classical music and modern rock, bringing ponies from all over the land to experience the lights and sounds (and to get wasted at the same time).
But not all is well in the land of wubs. Vinyl and Octavia still have to deal with their personal lives, as well as the lives of their patrons. Can the two of them handle the responsibility or are they destined to crack?
You must meet the dress code to read this story.
Cover by Arby-Works
Edited by Spabble
Chapters (2)
I wub this story so far.
And yes I had to use that pun.
Very original
I'll give it a read <shameless advertising
> when i've finished the chapter i'm witing for 'The Wolf'
>mixture of classical music and modern rock
where's Vinyl's contribution? She should be bringing da' wubs. Everyone knows that.
1116826 It's more of a broad statement that includes anything that isn't classical. Although I can understand the confusion.
Thanks for reading!
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But by fanon standards, she's the dubstep DJ of Pon-3-ville.
You have my favorite. Do not disappoint me.
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It's k, but she is more of a Dubstep DJ by fanon standards.
I get where you're coming from, though.
Wait, what dress code are you referring to?
I wasn't aware ponies even had one, let alone one for human patrons.
Yes! Second read! When I get back to my brothers nook this is most definitely going in my favorites! By the way...I keep seeing the number 21...does that mean something...? Message me :P or I'll message you when I return home.
Yes! Second read! When I get back to my brothers nook this is most definitely going in my favorites! By the way...I keep seeing the number 21...does that mean something...? Message me :P or I'll message you when I return home.
Yes! Second read! When I get back to my brothers nook this is most definitely going in my favorites! By the way...I keep seeing the number 21...does that mean something...? Message me :P or I'll message you when I return home.
My bad...3ds ruins everything!
Nice,but poor Vinyl =(
P.s. if it's rated teen+, you can swear...
Hello Smoking, your friendly neighborhood Equestria Daily pre-reader here! You have promise! I just wanted to comment that you should be getting your submission response later today.
I wanted to do something like this,but i thought i was too inexperienced.Thanks for doing it for me!
I was summoned, so I will read
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Okay, friend. Here I am.
And what a story you've asked my to critique.
This is amazing. Just flat-out astounding. Your ability to craft such a unique and vibrant setting is truly amazing; your club is next to flawless in description. I can easily visualize myself in it (in the “Le sophistiqué résident ici” section, mind you. Keeping it classy). Secondly: characters. Vinyl and Octavia, used so much, but fully understood by so few. You, my friend, understand both perfectly. I love your Octavia in particular, so different from my own. The way that you've crafted the duo so they can bounce banter off each other is particularly entertaining.
I hate to say it, but there's really not much in this story that I can say is "wrong". It's well-written, original, humorous, and just all-out entertaining.
One thing, though. During your musical sequences, I'd like a little more detail on the music. Now, this might just be a writing style thing, since I absolutely adore in-depth musical numbers, but in my story, I've always tried to paint a picture of the sounds. You focus on the audience, which is just fine. At that point in the proceedings, it was important to elaborate on what the patrons were thinking.
All in all, this was phenomenal, and I look forward to seeing where this is going.
Cheers!
~ Desideratium
Hey keep up the good work. cant wait to read moar you have me hooked as a fan of you as a writer your style and stories are amazing. keep up the good work and quality.
OH yes Vinyl.
I dig.
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No shipping? Quite a shame. Though it is quite a nice little tale.
Pretty nice. But I thought in the last chapter things were destroyed? Or was that a flashforward? If it is clever move
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Check the time. It's a flashforward
Very cool idea so far, I can't wait to read more n_n
Oooh... first Only Human adn now this.. what OTHER stories are you gonna get me hooked on now? :P
I like the thought of octy and vinyl opening a club together, though I wish octy would have said something about the mafia curier to vinyl she has more street smarts when it comes to that sort of thing
I lost at: "Nearby, a duchess was making out with... nopony knew whom exactly, but there it was."
Imma be all creepy like and watch you, cus i liek ur stories.
Vinyl and Tavi's interactions....my sides are on fire
why is it that 10% of Vinyl/Octavia fics I read somehow involve the mob? It's kinda ridiculous really.
4188969 Because of Mafia Octavia. Go to my page and look to the right column.