• Member Since 9th Jan, 2017
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theponycaptorproject


Not much to say. I love to write, and I write just about every kind of story.

Comments ( 7 )

I can only look up to how guys like you manage to expand scenes like that

Nice touch with the conflict at the start, a realistic Detail

I personally don’t have a problem with it, but you may wanna put a warning that this is Foalcon in the description.

Awesome story do far!

be awesome and 20% cooler if ya added Soarin in. A fellow WB that Dash trusts immensely (and vice versa) and could act as kind of a father figure (a very sexy one) =D

Mostly good, but the jump to regret seems too sudden. I feel like there should have been just a little hesitation on Rainbow's part before the act.

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