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Masterob
Not much to say, just a guy that likes Video Games, Anime and Ponies.
Masterob
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Not bad masterob this story is going off very well and don't worry I'll help you out with the intimate scenes so the ponies can have more passion when your describing them making special love to each other so they can make their time together for one another very meaningful. I got your back Bro!
Looking forward
Neat chapter
Hope to see you write again soon
Soo.... Don't know if you got an editor.... But I have noticed you have messed up in the names alot times throughout the story.... Just an FYI, it's a little confusing from time to time...
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I don't unfortunately, I proofread my chapters on my own and mistakes do slip through the cracks. I'll fix it up.
"Think she and Scootaloo could hook up?" Cozy Glow asked.
"Ah don't think so, ah mean I don't think Cozy Glow is into girls, Scootaloo might be since she once told me she had a crush on Sweetie Belle," Apple Bloom quickly covered her mouth. "Oops, that was suppose to be a secret."
wait cozy glow was talking to apple bloom was it Dinky who was talking to apple bloom
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Whoops, my mistake. I'll fix that. Thanks for pointing it out.
11664002 your welcome
"...You said Sweetie Belle knows about this right? That she came up with this idea?" Rumble asked
"...you mean cozy asked?
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Thanks for catching that.
Looks like I goofed again.
I should go through this story again and check for typos soon. Make it a better read.
11667982 it's okay we're not perfect i just want to help you if that's okay
11668057
It's no problem. I do appreciate typos being pointed out. So long as whoever pointing it out isn't being rude about it. So I even more appreciate that you're being friendly about it.
11668381 you're welcome thank you
("Have you ever come here with Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo or Rumble?" Cozy Glow asked.) i did you mean apple bloom not sweetie belle?
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Thank you for alerting me to that.
11822286 your welcome friend^^
(Chrysalis is making due at The Chaneling Hive) i think it's The Changeling Hive?
11824228
At this point, you're practically my editor.
11824461 true just to help a friend as best i can
"I'm sorry you feel that way, but it's for your own good," (Sweetie Belle.) "Plus it's way less of a headache for me too." just find this if it helps do you mean cozy glow?
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Actually, it was Sweetie Belle, I just forgot to add 'said' at the end. It was supposed to be 'Sweetie Belle said.' It's fixed now though.
11827944 oh okay I don't think about that 😅 but thanks 😊
11667982 Fortunately Rarity didn't seem too bothered or worried by the statement, ("Well for starters Rarity,) found this?
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Fixed it, thanks.
11836062 your welcome friend^^