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This story is a sequel to Sweet Affection 3
Rumble had been away for months following the Changeling and Siren Invasion, during that time a lot has happened. Now he’s on his way back home from Flight School and met a new friend along the way. But can Cozy Glow be trusted? What is she planning this time around?
Plus Tender Taps wants to admit his feelings for his favorite princess, and is getting the help of a very special filly to do so.
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Well here we go again partner.
I just wanna give you some advice. This is really great, but Cozy Glow is such a unique character with a talent of manipulation. I know your trying to make it reasonable, but cozy Glow would never stumble over her words when lying. The way you wrote her character doesn’t really sound like her at all. Atleast not to me. She also doesn’t ever worry about something going wrong. If something does go wrong, she would usually just lose her temper. But anyways, Sorry if I seem pushy but, Cozy Glow is my favorite character in the series so whenever she gets the chance to shine in a fan fic, I always want her to be at her best. This is Just some friendly constructive criticism. I’m any case, this is a really good story so keep it up!
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I’ll take your feedback and work on Cozy Glow, appreciate the review.
Nice, love the inclusion of the Student/Young 6 in this chapter, can’t wait for the next one
It's Smolder.
Her name is Smolder.
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Fixed it, thanks for pointing it out (twice it seems, awkward
Cozy had her eye slightly peeked open, a little amazed by what was happening not too far off. She observed their make-out tactics, seeing how the two gently caressed each other. She turned her attention to Rumble, wishing that could be them.
But why wish, when she could just go for it, after all, Sweetie Belle wasn't here. She made her move, leaning in and nuzzling her nose against his, like she saw Party Favor do to Sugar Belle.
"Sweetie Belle..." Rumble said in his sleep. Cozy looked a bit disappointed upon hearing that filly's name, but it can't be helped, if anything she can use it to her advantage.
"I'm here for you, Rumbly..." Cozy said, leaning in for a kiss to the sleeping colt. In Rumble's mind, or rather his dreams, he was kissing Sweetie Belle, unaware of the filly he was truly kissing.
Cozy relished in her kiss with Rumble, keeping an eye on Party Favor and Sweetie Belle, to see what they would do next. This was gonna be an interesting night.
Damn you Cozy
Also, glad the Young/Student 6 are playing a bigger in this then I thought
The calm before the storm
Where was Button Mash all this time? Also I'm guessing he's dating Dinky. (Why did I thought of that?)
Wow
Well I gotta admit, it is kinda cute how Cozy has kinda taken a liking to Rumble. If not for the fact that he's already taken, and well, she's well, a villain, who knows, maybe they could have had something.
So, Cozy really wants Rumble. Shame it's likely never gonna happen. What with the deceit, and well being a villain.
Well, the good news, Rumble is back in Ponyville and reunited with his friends and marefriend. The bad news, so is Cozy Glow, and possibly with Sonata still on her side.
Well, guess Rumble is about to see Cozy Glow's true colors with his own eyes.
Oh no, are Rumble and Sweetie gonna break up?!
Dang, sad that they did break up, at least temporarily. Also, really cute that Twilight admits she's willing to give Tender taps a chance when he's older. I guess that's just how life work, relationships can change over time.
I hope Rarity doesn't hate Rumble now when she finds out about the breakup.
Add stealing his cherry to Cozy Glow's list of crimes.
Did we really see Dinky and Cozy Glow willingly offered themselves to being Rumble's sexfriends?