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This story is a sequel to Sweet Affection 2: Friends and Romance


Rumble has been in a loving relationship with the filly of his dreams for a whole year and has really made close friends with the rest of the Crusaders, along with his already best friend Dinky and new second best friend Tender Taps. But now they have other things to figure out, like why Twilight is planning a festival, why she seems to enamored with Tender Taps, why she placed Rumble in charge of Flurry Heart, and why Changelings and Sirens are suddenly invading.

The last part may not be so ideal for them, now they must team with The Elements and many other ponies to stop the invasion of the returning Queen Chrysalis and her Dazzling allies.

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 31 )

Don't you mean she and Owlowisicious got out unharmed?

The Elements of Harmony decides not Twilight, not her friends, not the princesses, and not the Pillars of Light.

Flurry Heart's adorableness will sway the Sirens to her side.

Rumble explains everything to the gang next time on SA 3.

Didn't Twilight already knew about what the Sirens are during that other world business?

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This is assuming Equestria Girls isn’t part of the main MLP timeline since it seemed to be really vague if whether or not it was, plus it allows some alternate timeline exploits.

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It does connect EqG with MLP: In Rainbow Rocks Spike mentioning the Rainbooms about Twilight's new title and castle, in Friendship Games where Princess Twilight came out of the portal explaining them about the time loop she went through with Starlight Glimmer.

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Still, I have little knowledge on the EG movies, so I can’t really reference them much, but maybe I’ll try adjusting it so that it seems like those movies could have happened and Twilight would likely recognize them if she saw them.

Glad to see you back. Really enjoy your Sweet Affection and Friendship's New Flight stories. If you need a break take that break. You earned it.

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Much appreciated. I still hope to have more chapters and stories out soon, even if updates will be slower than I used to do.

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Whoops, thanks for pointing that out.

I didn't expect to see that "Sex" tag on here but hey it's a nice surprise. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to more chapters on this story from you. I'm really enjoying it so far :3 Especially the cute moments.

Also, good news, I think I'm finally getting back into writing :D

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That’s great to hear :pinkiesmile:

Huh... This looks like it's definitely going to be a bit big. You are going to need a few more deus-ex-machina.

Thes3 last 3 chapters felt... Rushed ._. I mean they all happened so fast and without warning. I get it, after waiting so long to update it you just want it to be over, but the pace is so jarring. Anyway good job the story was decent. It just feels weird compared to the endings to the other 2 stories.

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Thanks, I realized that they were being rushed, and like you said, I wanted to get the story over with. I had fun with it, but I did run into the problem of having an over abundance of characters to work with, and several locations. That and I didn’t know how to keep the story going and I had a little block so I just ended it., rather having rushed an ending than leaving it incomplete. Maybe I’ll go back in and edit the chapters, to at least pad them out so they don’t seem short or at least have a decent ending. Hopefully when I make the next story I won’t repeat this mistake. Appreciate the review.

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I'd say less padding required and more fill in the blanks. As is, the parts you have now are great bits of story, but with a lot of missing content. So for now leave it as is and add the missing parts when you can work them in so you don't feel pressured.

i really dont like sweetie belle being with rumble and not scootalo being with rumble
i prefer sweetie belle with button mash and scoots with rumble but i will give where credit is due nice story bro, good story .

Could Tender Taps have a kid crush on Twilight, kinda like how Spike had a kid crush on Rarity?

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I’m sure you’ll get your answer as the story progresses. :raritywink:

Not good. I could imagine Rumble being replaced by a changeling to infultrate the hero's friendship group.

I can only imagine how Twilight might feel if she ever found out that Tender Taps almost stole her first kiss in her sleep.

Well, if Flurry is this affectionate to Rumble now, what's she gonna be like when she grows up.

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