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20thCentury Brony


Two things to know about me: a guy who loves the 20th century's pop culture and a true artist need only please themself.

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Sixteen years after their last documented adventure, Sunset Shimmer and the Humane Six travel to Equestria to celebrate the Day of Unity with Princess Twilight Sparkle. However, both former students of Celestia are feeling some very strong feelings that follow them during an adventure that brings back demons from the past.

Based on the spin-off franchise and animations owned by Hasbro and the show by Lauren Faust. I don't own the cover image. It solely belongs to Xebck.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 3 )

Okay, I'm at the start of Act 2 and I'm going to be honest. I'm have a hard time getting through this story. I think you have a solid idea and I LOVE a good SunLight story, but you writing mechanics are a bit clunky. For example, why would the human girls use Celestia's name as a substitute for God or Goddess? It just seems like you had a hard time distinguishing the girls from the ponies. I'll keep going and see how the rest of the story pans out.

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I'll address that as soon as I can.

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Okay, Revel, I've looked it over and changed all of the God sayings that are related to the humans' perspectives so there won't be any further confusion in that department. I hope I've made your time here easier.

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