Two things to know about me: a guy who loves the 20th century's pop culture and a true artist need only please themself.
When Fluttershy’s little brother comes to Ponyville from his lifeguarding duty in Baltimare, she hopes for her friends to be nice towards the equally-shy stallion, but later regrets it when she realizes that they’ve all fallen head over hooves for the surprisingly handsome brother.
I don't own the comic cover this story is based on. This image is property of AwesomeSendpie with a few altered pieces.
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This was lovely to read. And absolutely hilarious too!
Just one thing,
I'm pretty sure Rainbow's supposed to say that. Otherwise, everything's pretty much great.
What should've been Fluttershys brother, instead we got a DISSAPOINTMENT!!!
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Found that error and fixed it. I'm glad you'd enjoyed it. Happy birthday to MLP: FiM!!!
Now this would make quite the episode! And the moral was absolutely perfect! A very interesting retelling of Flutter Butter and a reimagining of Flutttershy's younger brother, I guess if she had two brothers maybe one of them would be the middle, maybe Ocean. The brawl between the girls fighting for his affections was hilarious something to don't expect from mostly Twilight, Applejack and Rainbow Dash.
He ain't no Zephyer Breeze.
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Yeeeeaaaahhhh No,it May not have been perfect,but that Precisely it what gived Zephyr part of his charm.the WHOLE point and teaching of the episode was how one must persist trough the insecurities and Doubts,and how the support of those that love and care for us can help with that,and it’s Honestly amusing how people like You forget that.
(PD:srry If I came off as mean in any way,but really,this is one of those things that thicks me off)
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. I wasn't trying to replace Zephyr. I was only making a story based on the comic I saw.
There's no need to be sorry
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Oh no!It wasn’t to you bud.I can understand that,I was saying that to the One I responded cuz he just go and called zeph a “disappointment”when he was just designed the way the Episode needed for it to tell is teaching.
There nothing wrong with the story itself as is just a Fanfic,and everyone on this site is free to Write whatever they want
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Oh, sorry about that.
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No harm no fool friend,have a nice day,afternoon or night!
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Likewise. Goodnight.
I remember reading this comic! it was super hilarious and fun to see you write a full on fic of it! everypony was in charecther, the moral was great, and most of all i was laughing so hard! FANTASTIC JOB! This is going in my favourites! Happy 11th Birthday Friendship is Magic indeed. Also if anyone is gonna touch that handsome stallion its me! i... may have painted mutliple portraits involving those.... big... gorgeous eyes.... (Jk Ocean its ok, i was kidding around and respect your boundaries)
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Thank you very much! If you like this, you’re welcome to check my other stories out. And many more to come!
Her brother kinda just blew off a mare who was interested in talking to him on a train. Yeah, it's annoying to be seen as only attractive and nothing else but how the hell does he expect to find a mare? Does he want a mare that doesn't find him attractive? I mean, it's kinda part of life and relationships. She did clearly say she wanted to talk.
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Who knew twilight had it in her to be so petty and succubus like that? guess its not immune to all girls.
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They made it abundantly clear that just like the mane 6 at first this lady pony wasn't interested in ocean breeze as a pony but as a attractive boy toy. (there is more to his character than that. I'm sure she didn't mean ill but Fluttershys brother mentioned he's tired of being fawned over by his looks and needed to assert himself.
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He simply says he can tell "just by her looks". Well, seems like she finds him attractive and wants to talk. Seriously, how the hell is a mare supposed to approach him then? Again it's natural for attraction. She at least tried to talk to him. Dude will never get a girl at this rate.
After a year of thinking about this story's ending, I've decided to change it into something that would keep Ocean's shy, yet personality-over-appearance mindset than make him seem like a jerk to every pretty mares that comes his way. I hope this one will slide better. It might not drive the message in harder than the original ending, but I, for one, as a writer, believe characters should not, under any conditions be portrayed out of character. Either way, here's my story, but with a revised ending. Enjoy it.
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By the way, happy early 12th Birthday to Friendship is Magic.