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This story is a sequel to The Morning After Last Nightmare Night


Not a Human In Equestria story, just a story where some humans happen to be in Equestria and have an appearance in a scene. The story isn't about them though, it's about ponies.

The Harmony-Bearers have taken a trip to Manehatten, all six of them, and this evening convened at a bar for a round of drinks. Under the influence of alcohol, lips loosen and they speak more freely about things they normally wouldn't. They talk about their feelings, about things that might have burdened them and things that they desire

At a nearby table, three ponies, two Equestrian-raised humans and a third from one of the human colonies sit. For a scene, the very later eavesdrop on the six mares nearby and makes some cultural commentary and comparisons to his companions about what he hears.

[Comedy]: My priority, first and foremost.
[Slice-Of-Life]: They just sit there and talk.
[Romance]: Two of my favorite ships are in here. The first one is Unrequited. The other one, I'll leave you to find.
[Sex]: Ponies are mammals and talk about their libidos.
[Alternate Universe]: The inclusion of humans as a native species to this world veers it far away enough from canon to include.

[Prequel not necessary. I just wrote these stories in a similar vein to one another and they come one after the other in my head. I think one reference is made.]

Takes place before season 5

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snozzberry....


*licks the back window of a police car* The snozzberries taste like snozzberries!


SUPER TROOPERS REFERENCE!!![youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=fyufZ8NPeZk]

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β€œI really only thought about it afterwards,” Twilight said, ears splayed back. β€œI was so caught up in the moment, but when I played it back it seemed so mean spirited.”
β€œSame here,” Applejack added. β€œWe made up a whole big lie just ta mess with ya when, maybe, we shoulda just come to you and been upfront about it.”

THANK YOU... someone...

Hahaha, and also this was hilarious, so nicely written man, eheheh

7651288
I would note how I wrote only Jack and Twi to be upset with this, whereas the others, sans Rarity, were okay with it. Even Dash, who struck me as the sort to appreciate the effort in such an elaborate prank.

The voices I give each of them on the matter I think draw a point, not without merit. Who is more right, if any, is matter I won't get into.

7652149
Mmm... point taken good sir, point taken. I won't delve into it either, but I will say I just disliked it for... well, obvious reasons.
Regardless, good work on this, full of laughs and such, so keep up the good work dude.

8099847
Well, it was meant as a quick aside.

Nice character-building! I like it!

Ri2

Hmm. That bit with the humans intrigued me. Kinda want to know more what that's all about.

8971877
Well, I got Lore: Humans here, if that helps

Ri2

8972005
Okay.
Also, what happened with Twilight and the caribou?

8972052
That's a reference to Under The Northern Lights, where the reindeer (who are the caribou) believe Twilight must be an evil sorceress due to the their own culture mores on magic.

Ri2

8972068
Yeah, I figured.

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