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20thCentury Brony


Two things to know about me: a guy who loves the 20th century's pop culture and a true artist need only please themself.

T

Set after "The Perfect Pear" and Apple Bloom's birth and before "The Cutie Mark Chronicles" flashbacks, Pear Butter and Bright Mac are on their way to Vanhoover to meet Grand Pear with the intent of making amends. While waiting at the train station, the apple parents separately encounter mares and stallions that will be recognized as the parents of Equestria's future heroes.

Rated "Teen" for contents at the end. Cover image belongs to AdeleMLP.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 14 )

Not bad, though it could do with more showing and less telling.

This was a really good first chapter. There aren't enough stories with the mom 6 out there so I'm glad you contributed to that kind of stroy. Looking forward to seeeing more.

“I know that.” Pear acknowledged. “I can’t imagine what my son and two daughters would turn out to be if something were to happen to me and my husband. I mean, they’d still have my mother-in-law to look to for guidance.”

Ohh ow my heart that hurt so much when she says that because we already know what's going to happen to her and bright Mac 😢

Wow this is a pretty interesting way to start off the story seen how pear butter it's trying to make amends with her father but instead she met up with other five ladies of mothers who will become friends in the later years which it was also nice to see them hanging out and also having the mother of the main six becoming friends in the later years there was a story is like that that the parents of the Mane 6 our friends way before their time called Friendship Existed: The Previous Generation but I do know that this is a pretty good start of a story and I can't wait to see how this will work out we'll find out next time and Happy late Mother's Day

Really liked this! Hope you make more!

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Trust me, TM. This is only about the mothers. Wait until you see my chapter in the fathers.

Well it looks like bright Mac is having the same suspension as pear butter he meet a male pegasus the father of Rainbow dash invited him to join in with the other fathers of the main six and it's really nice to see them to hang out and talk about there life's and anything but it looks like he get to go and finally talk to grand pear and stop this fued once and for all and hopefully it will work out this was a good story of fathers day

Yeah I should have seen this coming sadly because I'm the show they are not around which is pretty sad that they die its a pretty bitter sweet ending

Yeah it's a good thing that you put the gore and death tag on it because I was not expecting that well I mean we know what happened to them kinda but I was not to be violence

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I was honesty not going put the tags on at first, but a second glance at the rules changed my mind.

This was a bitter sweet end but I enjoyed the story at the end of the day. We need more stories with the mom 6 and/or dad 6 together and I'm glad you contributed to that.

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I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Who knows? Maybe this will inspire other writers to make stories about the parents like my own.

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