Ponies and humans have been friends for several years. They trade, conduct joint research, and communicate. Equestria is thriving, and the Alliance is healing the last wounds of a long-ago, terrible war.
What happens if the wondrous world of ponies collides with its "reflection"? Once a beautiful country, now fallen to the ruthless invaders. Languishing in the thrall of those whose appetites are irrepressible?
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So basically, a Human/Pony Space Faring Alliance meets "Fall of Equestria" Universe. And kick/destroy the rapist Caribou asses?!
The conflict in this story is so horribly one sided it's not even funny.
How people think stories where the main character and their alliances can win any fight without even the most basic of challenges make no sense to me in the slightest.
It's an interstellar empire with the reasources of a dozens of worlds and space age technology, against a bunch of dudes owning a single country on a single planet who just so happen to have a little magic.
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Something like this. However, more in the direction of "shoot any caribou as soon as it gets into the scope". And then they will have to restore everything that caribou destroyed.
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Well, that's your opinion. I understand, but I will continue working.
Fan fiction is written out of an irrational desire to somehow correct the horror seen. I cannot change the will of the original authors. But I can create my own branch of history.
If you don't like it... Well, we are all different and I can't please absolutely everyone.
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Well, you could have done something to atleast spice up the drama and make it stand out from all the dozens upon dozens of other 'super powerful character/group goes and invades Equestria to save it from the Caribou and kills them all cause they are just so powerful' fics on the site.
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Well, the Caribou deserve for what's coming to them. And I do love OP Sci-Fi Factions!
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I'll try my best. I have some ideas, but all of them need be unfolded at first in russian.
Caribou. I hate those reindeer.
Ok so if I understand everything correctly, the caribou and 'Fallen' Equestria are Anthro
'Free' Equestria is 'feral'/Quadrapedal with humans helping them kick ass all over
I see no issues here (other than the broken grammar at points)
I know they were enslaved for a while... but damn she is skinny in that picture
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Well, Graceful should be skinny, she's an aerial dancer after all. Plus, the artist's style itself is quite "skinny". He made even an infantryman as a long "pole", what can we say about a miniature pegasus?
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Yes, two "reflections" of Equestria, one "feral", one "anthro". And humans as contract soldiers.
And I definitely need to find some way to check grammar better than my own proofreading. I definitely don't find all the errors
Does anyone know who did the cover art?
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Yes, i know.
That guy: https://www.furaffinity.net/user/darkcat613/
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Thanks!
I usually try to pretend that FoE doesn't exist, as every time I think about it, I slowly become more and more enraged.
But I do really like that cover image, so... Think I might read this.
I have trouble understanding this one, even more so with the dialogues, they are.......confusing to say the least.
Have to say, despite the story's shortcomings with poor grammar, and very one-sided conflict in favor of the heroes, there's a certain charm to it that really grabs my attention. I also find the worldbuilding about human technology interesting, specifically the psychic network thing (I forgot what you referred to it as). I'll be sure to follow this regularly!
It took me a solid minute to figure out these are the lyrics from Sabaton's Unbreakable lol
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Thanks for the kind words) Poor grammar in this case is the fruit of using an online translator with subsequent manual editing of the text. And, alas, I do not know how to improve the situation in the near future. Yes, it's easier to write in Russian than to translate later.
I am glad that you liked the described world and its details. "Psycholink" was invented as an alternative to classical radio conversations among humanity, which awakened its own psychos. So far, there are no inserts-explanations about how to contact ponies and people and weapons. It is far from even in Russian.
As for the unilateral conflict, there was just a desire to do something similar. There is too much despair and pain in the original Fall of Equestria. I just wanted to burn caribou to ash. And that began this story.
And yes, Sabaton is a classic) I hope that in the 24th century it will be held in schools as a wonderful example of power metal)
Bad ass cover art, but the you need an editor. I made the same mistake and despite that, I got 700+ upvotes. It would have been more with proper grammar and spelling and formatting.
I'm going to keep reading.
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I agree with ya, dude. This story's lore is very interesting, but the grammar and, at times, confusing dialogue made me give this a "meh" rating. Btw, it is good that you are writing stories again! I am hoping and praying for the best for ya, SVD!
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Thank you! I'm still gonna write some new stuff and update my old ones. I'm on here everyday and I'm on the Discord Server. If you ever wanna chat or ask questions, you know where to find me.
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Late reply, and that's cool, I will check it out
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Quick question, do you mean the discord server for Fimfiction (as seen in the bottom of the website)?
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Yes, I'm on there frequently.
You know, it probably does make sense to refer to a drop ship or a shuttle as a boat, it's just a little confusing