I'm just someone who isn't much of a talker, but does like to share several ideas I've thought of.
Different creatures are becoming a common thing in Ponyville, and hopefully everywhere in Equestria. However, there seem to be some unknown creatures visiting Ponyville, and they're not here for a chat. They seem to be attacking the dragons at the school, and the ponies and students have to find out why before someone is seriously injured.
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They are so gonna get their butts kicked by this mysteries ninja clan.
Problem: the characters in there is like blank paper. I don't know what are they look like (of course except the canon character)
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Yeah, I've been wanting to expand on the personalities of the original characters. The main idea I was having Gus was him being the griffon version of Dan. As in Dan Vs. You heard of that show?
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Hello. His editor here.
You can check out his blog on the names of the students, and their appearances.
This is basically a hate crime right now
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Do that in the fics, not outside.
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I know right. I feel bad for the dragons :(
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You should add their appearance in your fic because what reader see first is the fic, not the blog.
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I'll try and keep that in mind.
Ok so it looks like the Dragon name Prominence finally made it to Ponyville and she looks like she's talking with the other Dragon students including none ones a griffin and a hippogriff but when they try to leave the cafe they were attacked by a mysterious ninja creature but it looks like he's attacking the dragons the other two were just in the way but after he was done beating them up he disappeared but the other dragons are in bad shape so sunshine and Gus decided to take them to the hospital and it looks like the news report about dragons are being attacked so the other creatures are worried about it and it looks like the young six wanted to help Gus and sunshine out with the situation but unfortunately Gus have intentionally trying to get them in trouble he even asked Coral a female hippogriff to help because her friend Pyther got hurt because of that unknown creature so they have a plan to get a changeling named Moss to be the distraction while they're going to catch this unknown creature but unfortunately Starlight was on to them mostly Gus and something tells me this is going to be a long day and who is this mysterious creature and why does he hate Dragon so much to start a hate crime against them I guess we'll find out next time
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Okay, good luck for your writing. If there is a problem I will point out.
What is Gus planning...? Not sure I want to know...
Great job with the first chapter! Though I do have a question; what did Spike mean when he mentioned something Thorax and Ember went through?
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I think it was just meant to be what Ember went through. Maybe I accidentally wrote Thorax being involved or whatever.
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Ohh. Okay, thanks for the clarification. Great job with the chapter
“...Where will you get a crossbow?” Sunshine questioned.
“I brought it from Griffonstone. Be right back.” He flew back to his dorm room as Sunshine and Moss looked at the creature, who was looking a little worried while trying to escape.
... you know given his living condition in Griffin Stone I wouldn't be surprised that Griffin's have their own weapons but dang man
yeah I'm a big fan of The Three Stooges
That was a fantastic ending! Great job!
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Yeah, that's the kind of headcanon I wanted to explore; Equestrian Weaponry. Especially from creatures with opposable digits and not much magic.
Dang spike I didn't know you can do that that's pretty awesome man 😃
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Especially you have to defend yourself which makes sense if somebody tries to harm you
Either way Gus moss and sunshine did an amazing job of capturing the Kobold a ninjas skill creature got beaten by a couple of teenagers 😎
Ohhh burn somebody called out about the where about the guards when the commotion going on
Lol classic
Heck yeah Starlight and the Mane 6 to the rescue
Whoa dang that was something so it looks like Gus and the other two creatures with him sunshine and Moss to catch the ninja who attacked the dragons by using the changelings ability they got one of them out of hiding and when they found out what kind of creature is he he looks like a dragon but except for it's a smaller one and they called themselves Kobold apparently they wanted to get even with the other dragons who treat them badly and it looks like they got some information that he is not alone but it looks like dragonlord ember found them before he could say any more but apparently he lied that he came alone and Gus try to warn them but he was being blocked so many times meanwhile ember and spike help the other dragons to feel their bodies again and she told Prominence to go back home but it looks like Gus has another plan to help out the situation bringing out his sword to fight off the ninjas and it looks like ember and the guards was about to take the Kobold to the dragonlands but they were ambushed by four more but it looks like the Mane 6 and starlight came in just in time and a Little Help from Gus and Prominence and with that they finally defeated them but only one Escape and now they're on high alert for him if he ever tries to return but at least Gus was pretty proud that he got to save them even though he got in trouble for it but you know he did a good job and it leaves one little question well that creature come back I guess time will tell anyway this was a pretty good story keep up the good work you guys.
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Me too.
I was the one who added that line.
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Nice I like that
I thought Twilight might want to question the kobold's claim to being treated like slaves.