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This story is a sequel to Set Sail for Freedom


The students’ map is now calling for Capper, Ember, and Thorax to head to Abyssinia‘s capital; Panthera. Capper himself isn't feeling too fond of returning to his homeland given how he left a bad impression on some of his only friends. Ember and Thorax are there for their companion even though Abyssiania isn't so fond of magical creatures like them.

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Wherever the map calls, it is your mission to resolve the issue. What makes it more interesting is that it expands to other unheard exotic locations like Zebrat, Caninia, Ornithia, and a town full of minotaurs. Now, the expansion continues, and more distinct lands are yet to be unearthed. It’s about to occur right now.

It would be very interesting to see them again and even the kids to the friendships school

“He says that his name is Dapperpaws, and he’s… some sort of cat creature.”

Gasp capper 😃

They both arrived at the conference room, and Spike opened the door. In shock, he noticed both Thorax’s and Dragon Lord Ember’s wings and spines respectively glowing, just like Capper’s whiskers. Ember, being clueless as she was like Thorax and Capper, panickily and rigorously stroked her spine thinking it is some sort of disease. Normally, the Dragon Lord is the one who made the call for the dragons by making their bodies glow, but this is different.

So once again none of the main 6 didn't go well I'm going to treat this as a alternate universe story

“S… Sorta,” Capper responded. “I left Panthera on bad terms, especially with my buddies.”

Oh yeah that's right I remember reading that comic it's supposed to be before the events of the movie 2017

There came a long pause from Dapperpaws, nothing but breaths and his visible dismal face. Capper sighed. “Brutal.” He slouched on the bed staring at the ceiling as his ears dropped. Spike sensed that this circumstance was getting uneasy.

Both kittens skimmed the storybook thoroughly reading the words together slightly one by one. For kitties like them, there are terms that they couldn’t pronounce properly or never heard of. For the words ‘knob’ and ‘knowledge’ , for example, Capper couldn’t silence the letter K, nor the letter E in ‘cane’ and ‘nose’ . He is even confused with different pronunciations of the four-letter suffix ‘-ough’ in the words ‘cough’ , ‘bough’ , ‘rough’ , ‘through’ , ‘tough’ , ‘thorough’ , ‘dough’ , and ‘enough’ . Terms like ‘environment’ and ‘symphony’ were very new to his vocabulary and he didn’t know the definition. Capper’s partner however did try his best to correct him and give an explanation of the definition in the simplest way possible.

Yeah I remember going through something like this and it was super annoying but everybody needs to know the differences between those words

The boys groaned as they walked downstairs to resume their schoolwork. Shadow thought she would be getting out of it with her injury, only to see one of the caretakers carry some books up to her bed. She groaned as she knew she was going to be bored for hours.

“Great…”

Yeah story of my life

Once they were out, they left the orphanage right away without any trouble. Now it’s their chance to finally explore the city of Panthera for the first time.

“I haven’t seen it from this angle, but I’m sure it is,” Capper commented. “We’re here.” When he took a gaze at the city, he quickly caught a glimpse of something else. Two hot air balloons floating above the metropolis connected by a red, long and enormous banner with painted white text in all caps that read something none were pleased about: NO MAGIC ALLOWED! “Ah nuts, that can’t be good.”

And here comes the problem

“There has to be a few reasons,” Thorax noted. “A few creatures like us do tend to go mad with power.”

Case in point cozy glow Tirek storm king and in the future of G5 Opaline

Ember rolled her eyes at this while Capper was surprised by what he witnessed. He then laughed and remembered something. “Ooooooh, CHANGE ling ,” he giggled, “That’s a good one.”

Yes I also get it too as well it took me a while to realize that

Well this was a pretty interesting start of a story and it's awesome to see Capper again and once again I'm probably had to treat this as an alternate universe story but anyway Twilight is having a meeting with the other leaders but there was another unexpected guess and it turns out it was Capper and right now he really wants to lay low with Twilight Castle for some reason before he was about to get some answers apparently the tree of Harmony is calling out for Capper and surprisingly thorax and ember so they had to call off the meeting early and heading for the crystal treehouse and they need to know where the location is and it turns out the location is Panthera the home of the cat people which that turns out to be Capper home and they're on the way to their destination and capper gave thorax and ember some background story about his younger years and it turns out he was an orphan and he was having some tough time but luckily he became friends with Chummer and he's been helping Capper to learn how to read and it looks like they made another friend named Shadow and she's a very athletic Kitty one day Capper and Chummer decided to go to downtown to check out the place and they did they will look like they were having fun until they ran into a little trouble and causing damage and they're afraid to get caught and they were not alone Shadow was with them but they need to get home before they get in trouble and they did finally got home without anybody noticing it and it looks like they're going to keep that as a secret so after that story they all decided to sleep because they still got a long ways to go and it looks like they finally arrived the next day but unfortunately they have trouble apparently this town ban magic probably creatures as well which that's going to be difficult for ember so they tried the best to disguise her like they say this is not going to be easy well I guess we'll find out next time

“Shadow, get down from there!” cried a caregiver.

Also I actually really like her she's pretty cool

Quite the interesting pairing here with Thorax, Ember, and Capper. Can't wait to see what happens!

With name like Panthera, i could have sworn you'd add some big names like Lion o or Cheetara

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Maybe those could be names of other big cities

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I'm making a reference lol and i mentioned names of certain characters.

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I know but I’d like to expand on these other kingdoms

Capper pondered and considered it as he checked both of his pockets for money. Unfortunately, he didn’t have any of it. None except for a moth flying out of his right pocket, and circling Ember’s head two times and left. “We’ll… work that out later,” he said as they noticed that they were now entering the city of Panthera.

Lol classic of pocket empty

“In case you forget, 10:00 PM.” With that, the policeman left, leaving Capper confused.

Dang that's pretty early then again I remember during those pandemic of this whole curfew

“Oh no,” she said to herself, realizing those flowers are from the dragon sneeze tree. Again, they were almost straight across from where Ember was sitting, so she was going to get a good whiff of the pollen. Ember did her best to cover her nose, but it was not going to be easy.

I mean who came up with those name anyway it's not really that clever :facehoof:

The two stood there in awe before the female cat got tears of joy in her eye. She cheered as she swooped up Capper in a hug. “Oh, Cap, I haven’t seen you in years!” she wept. “I… I wouldn’t think I would see you again.”

Oh wow shadow I was hoping we'll see her there

Capper was quickly cut off when Shadow covered his mouth. “Cap, I might be happy to see you again, but you cannot be saying that word around here anymore. It’s the orders of the new king.”

Kind of reminds me of this whole Magic is a bad thing or a jinx in the future of My Little Pony a new generation

“Excuse me?” Capper suspected. He hadn’t heard that name in a long time. The officer took a moment to turn around, and noticed Capper behind him with Shadow and Andy. Immediately, he recognized him. A large amount of awkwardness could be felt in the air. “Ch… Chummer?”

Oh boy now this is when things get really awkward

Wow things did not going according to plan and it really escalated really quickly so the three creatures needs to know what was going on especially with this whole curfew and apparently this no magic in this country so they went to a train which unfortunately days and not pay for it and the conductor got suspicious with them and unfortunately one of the passengers had a flower which turns out to be a dragon sneeze tree pollen and ember kind of blew their cover because of that and all the three creatures had to split up and unfortunately ember got caught and thorax has to figure out how to save her and find Capper in this whole chaos but he was found by an officer who caught a little kitten named Molly and took her back to the adoption home alongside with thorax and probably he'll probably have to stay there for a while until he figured it out meanwhile after getting separated from the others Capper found himself meeting up with his old friend Shadow which apparently she is married to Andy flufferton which that's a pretty interesting turn of event and I did not see that coming and once again alternate universe but anyway Shadow was pretty happy to see him again and told him about how she's been doing lately and even capper told her his story and everything and it wasn't a very happy story for him and even took him to the house and clean up and everything and there are other way to the station but they bump into one of the king of the city which they're talking about the Dragon intruding and capper needs to figure out how to get her out of this situation and find thorax as well well I guess we'll find out next time

Oh boy, here comes the drama...

I like how we're getting a better introduction to each of the friends from the original comic though!

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Thanks. I feel that Max had the worst out of it since he’s literally just referenced as “The Muscles,” in the comics.

“...So, Sir Will,” Queen Gilda

We are talking about friend of Rainbow Dash Gilda?
https://mlp.fandom.com/wiki/Gilda
This one? Because I can't imagine that she would EVER use things like SIR or others... She is not the type...

“I gotta say,” Ember asserted, “this is the most splendid thing I have ever seen.”

You REALLY need to study characters. Splendid is something Rarity would use, not Ember, a DRAGON Lord. Forget being a ruler of Dragons, she is a dragon first of all, she speaks differently.

Comment posted by Gregory the Griffon deleted Mar 27th, 2023

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Hello, this is Gregory the Griffon, editor and proofreader for PonyPixel.

To answer your questions here:

  1. Yes, Queen Gilda is referred to Rainbow Dash’s friend Gilda. For context, you can read “A Griffon’s Gang” and “Rise of Griffonstone.”
  2. I was responsible for searching the appropriate vocabulary and adding the lines to make it sound better, including the flow of the story. In her defense, sometimes she needs to be our of her comfort zone. There’s nothing wrong in saying “splendid.” And yes, I need to dig deep on the personality more. I’ve been watching MLP for a long time.

The king of Abyssinia eyed the imprisoned dragon, not feeling too impressed. “Bizzare… I thought it would’ve been bigger than what I’ve imagined,” he commented. “Looks like we’ll need the regular police engines to transport it with a small cage car instead.”

Bizarre

On that specific shelf, she grabbed a book and showed it to Thorax. On the cover page, it contained various familiar creatures, i.e. dragons and ponies. He recognized it, however, they weren’t shown as the kind creatures he had met. While the dragons were shown as stereotypically mean and greedy, the ponies were something Thorax never expected. The earth ponies were shown to destroy with their immense strength, the pegasi caused havoc with their ability to control the weather, and then there were the unicorns, the most common species in the book, using their magic to bring our terror to all of Abyssinia.

That's probably this kind of thinking end up in the future of G5 but luckily a certain earth pony will change everything along with her friends

“This ‘friend’ has a name,” Ember stated, sounding very annoyed.

Aww that's actually nice of ember try to defend him

“Th… That’s sus .”

Oh yes that term I remember hearing that in the game Among Us

Well then things did not go as plan as the others could have gone so ember was about to be taken to another cell inside of a cage but Capper tried to reason with them they know each other but unfortunately the guards did not take it too well and even sending him into the cell with her with that they had to make their escape after that they had to hit an underground until everything is all clear meanwhile thorax was still worried about ember and capper but it looks like he's not doing alone a kitten named Molly is going to help him to sneak through the city and after the chaos been going on Unfortunately they are being chased so they had to take hidden underground as well but it looks like all three of the creatures finally reunited but they need to find a way to escape and also warned Twilight about the situation but escaping in the city is going to be this hard because now everything is very high security shadow on the other hand couldn't take it so she had to help out as well knowing to the fact that she will also get in trouble as well and Chummer was afraid this would happen knowing their history meanwhile Capper and the others try to figure out how to get themself out of here but it looks like escaping is not an option but maybe thorax wants to try to get them away while he's in disguise but unfortunately the king had other plan and use the scepter on thorax but then ember Capper and even Molly saved him but now they are worried about the little kitten so they had to make a decision Capper stayed behind while the others make their escape despite that knowing that he is going to be so much in trouble I wonder how they're going to get themself out of the situation I guess we'll find out next time

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I'm no fan of these Among Us jokes because they're too annoying... and as I'm editing this story, that's the first thing that came into mind, and decided to add that for some reason.

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That is just like that other old joke about any romance movies or shows are better than Twilight Saga which that's getting old as well and im not a big fan of that movie either but I hear that so many times and it gets old and the game wasn't too bad either it's a fun one but never got into it either as well my niece and nephew played it so that's why I know about these sus and all this stuff

That was a lot- I hope Capper's okay!

“I think they’re too far gone from saving.” Ember held her fingers between her eyes with anxiety.

I wouldn't say that we just need to come up with another plan

Chummer sighed as he peeked out the window up to the roof. “I know you’re up there. Get inside.” A figure wrapped in black bandages with only its eyes and fluffy collar exposed leaped through the window joining the men inside of the coach.

How the world did he know that was shadow I guess throughout his younger years he noticed her pattern

“I know, it’s a catastrophe,” Chummer admitted.

Ha you got to love the puns 😄

Their jaws dropped as they saw those huge objects Chummer was glancing at. Swarms of dark-colored airships hover up the atmosphere, with dark clouds turning the sky from light aqua blue to dark gray. They don’t appear to be the royal airship because their colors were supposed to be vibrant blue and golden yellow.

Oh shoot it's the Storm King and the army

“Why? You’re always making us do the dirty work! You do not care if we don’t get caught as long as you get what you want!”

Ohhh I kind of guess that's what breaks the bonds between him and chummer and probably shadow

Capper and Chummer felt terrible as they explained that part of their story. The visitors were just as speechless. “No! You were seriously going to leave Shadow behind?” Thorax asked.

Yeah that's actually pretty cold man so not cool 😕

“It’s a run-down town in the middle of the desert. It’s every creature for themselves out there. …The same method I was planning during that attack…”

Boy that sounds like griffonstone

“I… guess he affects more lives than us,” Capper sighed.

I mean he did try to conquer Canterlot I'm even imprisoned the other ponies

“Fire in the hole!” the indigo guard cried. Despite the dangers, the aqua and indigo guards didn’t let up on Ember and Thorax. They kept shooting and shooting to get them but failed.

Are they crazy they're going to get these people killed especially their own kind

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Capper and Chummer felt terrible as they explained that part of their story. The visitors were just as speechless. “No! You were seriously going to leave Shadow behind?” Thorax asked.

Yeah that's actually pretty cold man so not cool 😕

Yea it is, but this is 'survival trumps morals', first survive the event then seek ... harsh but even harder to do in reverse ...

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