I'm just someone who isn't much of a talker, but does like to share several ideas I've thought of.
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The Young Six don't seem to have trouble going through the Everfree Forest. Silverstream tamed Cockatrices and Ocellus can turn into any creature. However, one morning after they wake from adventuring in the forest they find something is a little funny. And not a haha funny.
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A thoroughly entertaining story with a fantastic concept and some fun effects of the poison joke (Silverstream's being my favorite), great job with this!
PS. Yona on the cheerleading team is something i didn't know I wanted to say made canon until now!
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Thanks. It's nice to have feedback. Plus, Silverstream being mute was an idea by Camera Sparks
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Well it’s a great idea and the way you worked with it was fantastic, all the other effects on the young six were just as much fun and even the ones Silverstream hypothetically made up were quite funny.
This is characteristic of this character. We are united by an easy attitude to life and optimism. So I wanna recommend you this site http://jokesfan.com/funny-pick-up-lines.html where you can find funny pick up lines for every day even for work. You can surprise your colleagues with good laugh and actually, it's always good idea to relax.
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Thanks, I think I'll use this for my next comedy story
Hilarious hrmmm now I can imagine the student's getting sandbar and ocellus with it as well as pranking the staff
For it these poison jokes can be dangerous at the time lol
Your transitions could use some work, since it was frequently hard to figure out who was where.
Especially at the beginning where they went back and forth between their dorms and cafeteria.
Also, there were quite a few misspellings and wrong words.
Should be "weighed down"
and more
Should be "an angry alicorn"
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Thank you for letting me know. I hate it when I have errors like this.
Yona’s got Sandbar doing it!
That was so close to being a harry potter reference!
Ocellequus!