I'm just someone who isn't much of a talker, but does like to share several ideas I've thought of.
This story is a sequel to Diamonds a Doesn't
Captain Celaeno and her crew are heading home to Ornithia. They’re bringing Queen Novo and Princess Skystar along with them as it seems the royal mother and daughter seem to have been a similar situation that the home of the Avians are in.
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Yeah it's also pretty interesting how other creatures would look like if they turn into a sea creatures
We don't talk about King storm no no no
Well gallus did see of that alternate universe when the Storm King did took over Equestria and let me tell you it's not pretty but it was a good story
Ohh it looks like Captain Celaeno is going on an adventure but this time with Queen novo and skystar aww no Rainbow Dash and spitfire they were actually pretty good helpful in the comics I can't really say much about bon bon and Lyra
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'Queen'
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Dang that voice command always miss pronounce my words
To be honest I thought she was pretty cool and she was the only character that we get the chance to get to know her while the others not so much which it was kind of disappointing they look pretty interesting
Sigh look I get what he she's coming from but not every creature are not like that but then again some pony is a creatures will take advantage of somebody's kindness and generosity I mean look what happened to Rarity with Siri and I had that same experience before and it kind of sucks
Ohh dear I'm sensing some deja vu all over again
What that's impossible I mean he did came back as a spirit when he possessed silverstream but other than that how unless there's some dark magic somebody bought him to life
Well this is very unexpected turn of events and once again I probably had to treat this as an alternate universe story but doesn't matter anyway so skystar was enjoying her day until she got the letter from her cousin silverstream how they been doing but then they had an unexpected guest and it turns out it was Captain Celaeno and the crew and Sky star was pretty excited to see her again and they even check around the ship and meeting up with the crew and Queen Novo told her daughter not to go in there and before things escalated their beaks were glowing queen novo skystar and Captain Celaeno and it looks like the Cutie map is calling them so they went to Ponyville and a saw silverstream alongside with the other hippogriffs and told her that they are going on a mission so they went to the Treehouse to check the map to see what their location is and their location is Ornithia which captain Celaeno and the crew was from and apparently they told them to go there so they went back to Mt aris to prepare and basically it's just only three of them have to go there to solve a friendship problem which is a pretty interesting choice and it's too bad rainbow did not join in because her and captain Celaeno are friends well anyway so they're on a way to their Homeland and Sky star is becoming bored and really want to do something so the crew show her some couple of few things they do while they're sailing and Captain Celaeno and queen Novo are talking about her Homeland and she even talked about the Royal Family including her friend Ocypete and it looks like they're about to arrived to their destination but unfortunately something is very wrong when they got to their Homeland everything was broken and abandoned and queen novo and skystar are sensing some deja vu something happened over there but before they could respond they were giant yetis attacking them so the pirate crew fight them off as best as they can but they're becoming overpowered by them luckily there was others saving them and leading them to their hideouts to hide from the yetis and apparently this is their new Hideout until they figure out the defeat the yetis but right now she wants to know what happened to the Royal Family so Madam harpy lead them to the castle and she went inside to tell them that they arrive and without any seconds the only creature who saw them was Ocypete which she was pretty happy to see Celaeno and even introducing her crew and the hippogriffs and she told them about what happened here and it was because of the storm king which apparently they didn't know that the storm king is dead but whoever is commanding the yetis to attack them is something far worse so she met up with the royal family and they seem better days they're trying to figure out how to get their Kingdom back well until then it looks like they're going to have to spend the night down there and figure out how to stop the yetis there should be a very long day for them well guess we'll find out next time
Kind of reminds me of rainbow when she tried to make the pie out of whatever and she has no idea what she put in there
Aww lol that's actually kind of cute 🥰 I wonder if they like each other
Wow it's just like Taz mania devil and ed from Lion King you just had to take a guess what they're saying
Boy I really felt bad for skystar she really wants to Tribute to the mission but apparently everybody is overprotecting her
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Yeah we have a spy down here
It looks like things are getting really difficult and something is not right about this whole situation so it looks like Captain Celaeno and queen Novo and the rest of the creatures trying to figure out what is going on here and it looks like Captain Celaeno and Mullet to scout out the outside area what the yetis are doing and while the rest are basically mapping the underground just in case they get lost which that's also a good idea and queen Novo is talking with the other family Royals about the situation outside Celaeno and Mullet went back to the show to get the food is necessarily to grab but unfortunately one of the yetis were on the ship and it looks like they're not wild animals but they are sapience and they had to make a hasty Retreat back to the cave and worn the others about the situation they discovered once they return they told the others to go back to the castle to check in with the royal family and it feels like princess skystar is feeling left out I'm sure she'll find her chance to shine soon but anyway once they made it there she told Ocypete about the situation and apparently they have a little suspicious about Madam harpy but before they could have gone with the conversation the yetis attacked and they breach into the hiding spot all of them fight back and coincidentally Madam Harpy and the others help out with the situation now it's starting to feel like something is wrong and it looks like the people are getting frantic about this whole situation but the king wanted to be sure that everything will be okay but unfortunately the people are getting frustrated with their decision but luckily With a Little Help from Queen Novo and Celaeno and bringing the hopes up to bring back their home so they had to prepare for the fight for tomorrow because this has to end but unfortunately something happened in the dungeon one of the yetis Escape but once the others made it down there there was no yetis or anybody down there and it turns out it was a trap somebody knocked out Celaeno and queen Novo I wonder who could be that corporate who portrayed their people I guess we'll find out next time
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It’s pirate talk, buddy. They use me instead of my.
Example:
“Avast ye, me matey!”
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Oh yeah that's right I forgot about that 😅
Good day, this is Gregory the Griffon here, the editor of PonyPixel.
I wanna say that I apologize for the hiatus for this story is because I’m currently in college as a freshman doing a lot of homework, and because of that, I didn’t have the right time to edit his drafts. As you know, I’m currently studying Animation in De la Salle-College of Saint Benilde, one of the prestigious colleges in the Philippines, and from the past 2 weeks after the orientation of the courses I’ll be taking, I’ve been given a lot of assignments related to the course to work on, and the procedures were… let’s just say… tiring, and the deadline is tight. It is stressful, but I’ll overcome these stresses, and will make to my success in education.
Don’y you worry, as of now, I’m still editing his recent draft on the 3rd chapter of this story, while simultaneously (or not) working on my assignments that’re important. So to all readers, be patient with it, so I can feel relaxed while doing these tasks. I hope y’all okay with that, and hopefully to not stress myself out with these.
BTW, you can also check out my DeviantArt account where I occasionally post a few artworks of my illustrations of PonyPixel’s Student OCs. I was improving my skills from time to time.
Thank you 🙏🏻
God Bless You.
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Oh ok no problem take your time you guys I know school is very important and I haven't been to the Philippines when I was seven so I'm sure things are a little different
Whoa I would say that's pretty awesome that she has the strength to do something like that but something tragic I wonder what happened
Yup and that was a pretty amazing transformation
Ohh ok that actually answer my question that's sad
I felt like that's a reference to the Avatar The Last Airbender
Aww captain Celaeno you really do like her so much
You mean happened so fast
So you basically betray your own kind for the money not only that's just the definition of Blood Money
Oh man this is getting very intense and also awesome to see the story again so it looks like Queen Novo and captain Celaeno and her crewmates where basically waking up but they felt they were trapped and the rising water rising up because of the waterfall and the others have to use every strength to break the chain but it was no use but then she remembers her daughter and she cannot let this happen she use every strength she has to break the chains and grab The Shard and transform everybody into a sea creatures just before the water hit the roof when they were trying to find a way novo talk about what happened to her husband in how she was killed by the Storm King and she cannot let that happen to her daughter they finally reached the surface but seeing their ship is a little damage because of Madam harpy and her crew but they use anything they can to get there as fast as they can meanwhile Ocypete ask skystar have she seen her mother and the rest of them and they didn't they begin to worry until Madam harpy return injured and basically lied through her beak saying that they were captured by the yetis and it looks like Captain Celaeno and queen Novo finally arrived and seeing all the battle going on and it looks like they're seeing Madam Harpy's crew are on the attack and trying to assassinate the king luckily Queen Novo stopped him and inform the king of the Traders of the Kingdom and Ocypete and skystar they're happy that they're alive but it looks like Madam Harpy show her true color apparently during the movie during the 2017 she made a deal with the Storm King if they take down their Homeland and become one of the richest creatures of all time but now all of that was Crush when Twilight and the others defeated the Storm King not only she blame them she blame the ones who helped them which it was Captain Celaeno and skystar but luckily Queen Novo stop her before she was about to pull the trigger but Madam Harpy was not done she even took down some of the buildings luckily everybody was okay but the one who is missing is Ocypete and they had to rescue her and deal with those Traders later but something tells me they need to stop them before something also will happen will they able to stop them in time I guess we'll find out next time
Yeah seriously that is kind of weird and pretty random
You are a very greedy murderer creature lady
“We’re gonna f***ing die!” Princess Zephyra cried.
“Language!” Queen Ozomeme warned.
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I can't help but feel something might've been lost in context.
Ohh yeah sooner or later that truth is going to come out you got some explaining to do captain
Lol I get it 🤣
This one almost got away from me but I think I pulled it off. Captain Celaeno is a character that has a lot of potential for stories due to her being a pirate. I was also curious to try and develop her crew since they didn’t really do much in the movie.
Well you're dealing with a movie that kind of runs an hour and it was unfortunate they disappeared when season 8 came around they only been mentioned all because the character who played captain Celaeno had a big name and unfortunately they can't ask her to come back for the series so I should have saw that coming
The idea I had for this story was a perfect fit for Novo and Skystar, since they as well as the avians were forced into hiding thanks to the storm king. It’s a simple case of history repeating itself.
Which I think that was a pretty interesting idea to get the two Royal family to help out with the situation although I kind of wish you could have Rainbow Dash with them since she's friends with Captain Celaeno I'm just saying it would have been an interesting one I mean Spitfire also help out maybe not a lot but better than bon bon and Lyra I can't say much about those two kind of a waste of opportunity to use those two
I kind of wanted to try and work on Skystar’s personality and try to make her a little more socially awkward compared to her cousin Silverstream. It’s not much and I don’t think I touched upon it too much in the story, though if I write about her again, I’m hoping to work on it more.
As for Queen Novo, I’m happy to dive more into her past and explain past events, such as why she’s so protective of Skystar. I found a theory I liked about the hippogriff king dying protecting the hippogriffs from the storm king. The name Waverider is the best name I found, so I figured "Why not go for it?"
For skystar yeah you did a pretty good job how to make a character from the movie and pouring more depth into her character and closest thing that silverstream are cousin so I guess their personality kind of works and queen novo yeah I kind of wish we had more stories about her since why is she always been like this and why she can't help Equestria especially helping Princess Celestia since their friends and what made her so afraid of the Storm King but once again you're dealing with an hour movie so they didn't have time which I kind of wish they put more hours into it but then again they didn't have that much and figures just like Captain Celaeno because both Queen Novo and skystar are played by a big name stars they can't come back only been mentioned and you can't replace those voice it's not going to be the same so that's another unfortunate event
Wow that was a pretty intense stuff here so captain Celaeno and the others to find Madam Harpy and her crew and not only that Ocypete but they finally arrived to the ship and it's about to take off without thinking skystar lifted captains Celaeno and Mullet and some of the others follow suit later and basically just attacked Madam Harpy and the crew and yeah they fought really hard and tried to take down the ship before it takes off far far away Celaeno found Ocypete but she wasn't happy that she found out that Celaeno work with the storm king before which she did regret everything but they were basically try to survive without getting killed and not risking her crew to get killed as well and Ocypete kind of understood that but she still kind of in a mix about this but she was still happy to see Celaeno and they almost having a moment with each other but they have to stop Madam Harpy before things get out of control but skystar had a crazy plan to take down the ship so with a little help on the royal family and captain Celaeno crew they managed to take down the and not only that Queen Novo and skystar use the Pearl to transform the royal family and captain Celaeno and her crew to sea creatures to catch her Madam Harpy and the other crew and with that she was defeated after that everybody who were under the cave return back to their Homeland and those creatures who were attacking them disappeared for some unknown reason but doesn't matter at least they're safe and it looks like Celaeno and Ocypete are walking through Memory Lanes wishing they could go back but sometimes we just had to move on to the Future and trying to make the better place they really truly care for each other but it looks like the Cutie map call them and told them is a success so now they had to return Queen Novo and skystar home but it looks like the king wanted to borrow the Pearl shard from novo and keeping Madam Harpy and her crew as fish underneath the cave trapping them very clever you guys and not bad for punishment for those guys I would say this was a pretty Epic story change of pace as well but pretty good I wonder ever going to see cappers story I guess that's another story well until then keep up the good work you guys
Ha cha cha, well looky here. I had no idea of Celaeno's original protoform. It really could double as her rival or something.
Btw, since the other elements don't exist anymore. What of the Knights? They have no reason to attack now. Nor even exist.
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I haven’t really figured out how to fit the knights in. I did think about trying to use one or two of their characters but not one idea about them all together
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So this is the end? No villain? No le epic finale? Oh well. Only thing left if not the Knights but the real Grogar
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I still have plenty of story ideas focusing on different characters. Not to mention other villains.
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Oh yeah which reminds me, don't think you've touched on Capper and gang yet, right? I didn't skip anything for sure
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No, Capper’s story is up next. Then a story about a former bully helping with the mail, then a story about the four kingdoms in the season 10 comic meeting up then an alternate universe that was meant for my 100th follower special. And few other stories that I’m hoping to get to one day.
You really need someone to look over your writing.
1) I see quite a few mistakes, and just plain wrong writing, even though it's not wrong grammatically.
2) Your "script" needs work. Why did you need Skystar? So far she hasn't contributed ANYTHING to the FRIENDSHIP mission. Remember? The Harmony Tree, that was supposed to send "DIPLOMATS" to TALK the problem over? This has direct CONFRONTATION.
WORDS do NOT WORK HERE. Best team would be... Tempest, Novo, Rainbow, Applejack. They are the most fit for a COMBAT. Maybe if you wanted them to actually LISTEN about traitors... I don't know. Rainbow, Capper, Rarity? I don't know.
If you say there is profanity - don't sensor it. If you don't want "kids to hear it, such as Skystar and others, don't put the swears IN at ALL.