A few months into their relationship, Sunset and Wallflower spend a weekend in a beautiful mountain cabin. Despite the serenity surrounding them, Sunset can't help but feel as if there's something Wallflower isn't telling her.
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Wow! First off, just... wow! The sheer love on display in this story, the emotions, the... oh my goodness. I can only dream to someday write something this good.
I adored the way Sunset cared for Wallflower despite Wallflowers worries about her self-harm, and the way in which her attempts to show how she cared, like getting the twin beds, were so easily misinterpreted. I could feel Wallflower's emotions like they were my own, and that's not hard given how easy she is for someone like me to identify with. Then things turned around and the sheer CARE on display with the sex, just....
This is love making. This is erotica. This is practically perfection in writing, and I was hooked from the start.
Good golly almighty are these two in love.
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Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.
They really do love each other, don't they?
I wish I had learned this long ago. Wanting to fix a problem is almost a reflex in some minds, but that doesn’t always work.
This little bit says a lot about Wally.
Ok, that whole scene was beautiful. Almost teared up.
I find this interesting because canonically Sunset has never seen the moon after Nightmare Moon was defeated, so she doesn't know what it looks like.
Wow, Wally, that was good.
You two are adorably in love.
These two just can’t help but be adorable together!
Oh that’s perfect!
This was beautiful in so many ways. From the scenery of the mountains, to the talks about the starts and destiny, to just them being together. The love, care, worries and all kinds of feelings are so well portrayed here,
This is simply perfect, and I wish there would be more stories like this.
Great job Gadot. Your writing seems to just escalate indefinitely in quality.
Also, I don't know if all of this is meant to be in Italics
Love the Howl reference. <3
Very well written, brought forth a lot of emotion
It would be weird to comment about how much of this is based on real events.
10975458 oh, you’ve been to the mountains, huh? Name three layers of geological strata.
This is probably the most pure sex scene I've read in a long while, oxymoron that may be.
It would be even weirder to leave a comment about touching myself while I read this <_<
Amazing story hope you do more in the future
Once again you never fail Ms. Gadot, spectacularly cute and pure as always.
Wonderfully described, tender, passionate and intimate.
Laniakea represent.
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Precision is important. At one point, I found myself thinking: I wish I could write like that. But truth be told, I don't think that would do me much good. There's already you who's writing like that, and I don't aim to be a copycat. It would be a little bit more precise to say: I wish I could write with such a quality like you do, with such a... flow, for a lack of better words. I am, a little bit or a little bit more than that, in awe. I think that's the point I was trying to make.
As for the story...
Sometimes, saying less is actually worth more. So I shall try my hand at that and leave it simple.
Beautiful.
Thank you for writing!
Top-notch work as always.