Now that is a thicc ass cover!

The story is also really intriguing, what with how Nightmarity is presented. Lovely stuff

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Thank you! And thank you for your help in making it come to life!

That cover art is making me feel things oh my

That image is really awesome, but it does look a bit NSFW. Gees, and to think I got scolded for using images that while yes they were somewhat suggestive, not as much as this image is. Save for the one Tempest Shadow one I'm using for that one story. It just feels like double standards to me.

Well, that was a nice read Love the insight into Nightmarity, or rather, Vanity.

Though... I presume a third one is in the works then? Hehe

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Thank you for reading it! I'm not sure yet on a third piece to follow, but it'll depend on inspiration striking me perhaps. I just had fun getting to work with a character in a new way.

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If it makes you feel any better, I actually got turned down the first time and had to edit it/"ken-doll" the art further before it got accepted. Think of it as just a good-looking pinup; thats my opinion of it anyway.

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I guess. I suppose that's what you get when you give an unhealthy amount of power to somebody, they like to see what they can do.

It feels like this would be the perfect moment to attempt to introduce rarities other half to Twilight. As far into the future as this apparently is introducing her to all of them would be interesting but I would love to see how you write Twilight's reaction to discovering that Rarity has a "second soul"

Loved this to bits - you have some excellent characterization here. And the ending paragraph was just what it needed to be.

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Thank you so much!

You can pair Spike with any lady and still deliver!

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Thank you very much! The drake’s got tons of potential in him; it’s just a matter of working it the right way!

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What about interspecies marriages?

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I’ve certainly no objections to them. Love is love, and love wanders in ways we never fully understand but embrace anyway.

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Do you mind who'll be Spike's potential wives?

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Oh, in that regard, I've not thought that far ahead. Some stories like these don't get planned that far out in advance. Not to say Spike would never get married, I've just not written anything in that direction as yet.

Loved it. Only critic is it had to end so soon! It'd be interesting off they managed a way to materialize her at least once... Teehee! Thanks for this story!

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Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this sequel. Maybe there's a future story for them, but who knows? I did have a lot of fun reinventing the whole idea of NM Rarity and all for this. I felt the character deserved more to be brought to her than just "evil magic dominates Rarity's personality", you know?

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yeah its interesting see somehting different, also because this doesnt invlve spike going to the dark side and still being loyal to her number one mare <3
i may try doing a pic related to this fic when i can!

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Oh, bless you! I'm just happy to see folks enjoying my work.

great job on story

cover art by bigdad? oh his porn comics are so good