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There’s more to the magic of friendship than meets the eye!

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After the Storm King invades and conquers Canterlot during a Friendship Festival, Twilight and her friends, including Fluttershy and her adoptive son, Thomas must journey throughout all of Equestria in order to save their home.

Special thanks to OliverSparkle for helping with the chapter ideas.

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Comment posted by Fawwaz123 deleted Mar 27th, 2021

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Yep, but with some edits because I’m making the characters treat Twilight well. And Thomas really scared of the Storm King and his army, including Tempest Shadow.

“Twilight! They’re going to kill you! Get out of here!” Cadance said.

Did anyone besides me get this Transformers 4 reference?

Applejack suddenly saw something up ahead, “Uh oh.”

“Oh, dear,” Rarity said. Rainbow Dash then sighed, “Don’t tell me. We’re about to go over a huge waterfall.”

“Eeyup.”

“Sharp rocks at the bottom, and no safer landing for us?”

“Most likely, but yeah.”

“Well... bring it on.”

They all fell into the waterfall while holding onto the log. “Wheeeeee!!!” Pinkie Pie screamed as they landed into the mist.

Anyone get the reference to 'The Emperor's New Groove'?

They suddenly heard Thomas crying while he was looking down in shame while Fluttershy hugged him, until he broke down and then hugged her neck and buried himself into her chest fur tightly. “Hey, hey, hey, easy, easy,” Fluttershy said, as he was shaking with fear and broke down with tears of sadness in a broken heart. “T-T-T... Th-Th-... The-They... They’re all... gone,” Thomas whimpered. “Shhhhhh shhhhhh... I’m here, baby. I’m here,” Fluttershy said softly.

Does anyone else besides me detect a reference to the Disney movie, 'Dinosaur'?

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I didn’t. It was shown in the script. He had a lisp problem

“Ya think she saw my sonic rainboom?” Rainbow Dash asked. “Are you kidding me ?!” Twilight asked angrily. “Twilight, calm down. We’ll get out of this,” Sunset said. “I hope you’re right,” Twilight said.

You just gave away our position!

But how will the Pearl of Seaequestria affect Thomas, will it turn him into a half fish or will he turn into a fish but different?

You know why the pearl turned Spike into a puffer fish by being a dragon.

“OH MY GOSH!!! WHO’S THIS LITTLE GUY?! HE’S SO ADORABLE!!!” The seapony then spun around with Thomas in her hooves and then brought him towards her chest for a tightly gentle hug. “And I’m serious! You really are adorable I could just smother you in my arms! Oooooh!” Thomas whimpered for air as his bubble felt like it was about to pop, so Skystar handed him back over to Fluttershy. “I’m glad you enjoyed hugging my son,” she said. “He’s your son?! That’s twice as adorable!” Skystar said.

Well, I can already guess what Silverstream’s gonna be like when she meets Thomas

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Yeah, Thomas would be hugged for two fishes out of water.

What will the pearl do to him according to you?

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Nothing. Just something to help them defeat the Storm King, but you’ll see.

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No, I mean it will give him if any ability or power.

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Nope. Queen Novo said that it might come in handy for the restoration of Canterlot, but we know it’s the staff that does it.

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I had already just confused myself with something else, sorry

So did you finish the chapter or did you miss something?

Can't wait for the next chapter and what happened to Thomas

Are you going to have Thomas meet Firelight, Stellar Flare and Autumn Blaze?

tambien seria bueno con esta cancion por su captura en 1:19

I like how Capper isn't doing what his canon counterpart did.

He then tossed him, and swung the staff and struck him like a baseball. “Nothing personal!”

He quoted Commander Rourke from Atlantis: The Lost Empire

“Awwww! Isn't that just so sweet!” The Storm King said sarcastically, until he laughed, pointing the staff at the two ponies. “Yeah. See ya!” He charged up the staff, but suddenly Thomas jumped by using a drape as a swing, and then landed himself on the Storm King’s shoulders and wrapped his legs around his neck tightly, and then grabbed his horns to tug them. “AGH!”

Do I detect a Monsters Inc. reference?

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Do you mean Transformers Age of Extriction Reference:

Cade! They’re going to kill you! Get out of here!” Optimus Said

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