HenryAnthonyCourtler
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Hey bro, haven't seem you in a while. And seeing your name, along with a 2nd person Octavia fic bought it for me. Fave-ing this hard.
Good thing this wasn't a Goris-style fic. Sex in a roof-top hotel pool just screams trouble.
A few grammatical errors, and the bit of meta humor, while I admit to getting a chuckle out of, was a bit out of place in a story like this.
Just another clopfic, nothing special, moving along.
"Right to the babymaker!" Haha, I'm loving this fic! Excellent work!
1180874
Goris-styled stories are the shit.
I wish you'd make this into a multi-chapter fic. But... It's a One-Shot. And that's something i'll always have to deal with.
1180954 Thanks a lot bud!
1180941 Didn't have any intention of placing meta humor to be honest. I'm sorry it wasn't anything special to you.
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I may have been a bit rude, but it really was kinda generic. I have nothing against OCxCanon (to be honest, I'm rather unbiased when it comes to ships), it's just that this really didn't do anything to set itself apart from the pack. It was a bare-bones story that really had no place because of how little it contributes, and the clop was short and very basic. Very ho-hum, boring, and forgettable.
I really recommend expanding both the story and the clop a bit more if you plan on making another one of this such one-shot clopfics.
1182881 This was one more straight to the point, but the next one shot with clop in it coming out has more significance.
1180999 They are awesome. At least it's the same guy over and over again!
1183031 When it comes to clop, I'm one of those guys who actually will read clop for the story. Just sayin'.
1184061 So you liked it XD
1184082 It was alright, but I prefer clop that's more centered on the story, not just mindless fucking. That being said, this is a oneshot, after all...
1184226 huh?
1184234 Sorry, that was meant for another commenter. There's this author named GorisTheDeathclaw who writes a lot of 2nd person POV clopfics that are supposed to be "funny", but they aren't at all. It ALWAYS ends with the main character being either humiliated and alone, or beaten up. You don't want to read this guy's stories at all, trust me.
As for the story itself, it's pretty damn good and well thought out. There's not enough Octavia hetero clop fics out there and we need more. Again, sorry about that previous comment. It was meant for another user.
1180874 Glad to see I'm not the only one who hates those stories. Seriously, what's his problem and what the Hell is so funny about his stories?
1184317 I don't hate his stories, I just need time to cool off and heal after being mentally scarred from the latest one.
I actually enjoy reading the various ways the main character screws up getting laid.
Goris is just... creative. Really creative.
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1184633 ?
1184642 I only read this because you wrote it....IT WAS AWESOME!
1184652 Really? What did you like about it?
1184686 Well, I usually don't like clop (Pony sex of any kind), but the detail that you put into it was pretty good. I didn't actually clop to this, but it was better than any other story I tried to read. I can't really specify what exactly I like about it though.
1184698 I'm glad you enjoyed it either way!
1184473 Maybe so, but it's amusing to think about just how many things can go wrong when trying to get laid.
1184698 Me neither. I don't even clop in the first place.
Fuckin',damn sexy stuff. Thumbs up for a good quality clopfic. SWEET JOB!
This is amazing! There aren't many clopfics with Octavia that don't have Vinyl Scratch in it. So can you make a clopfic with Vinyl Scratch x anon PLEEEAASE
I liked it, just one thing jumped out at me:
Antiquated means old or outdated. Did you mean "acquainted"?
1193870 Oh shoot. I meant acquainted XD I'll go fix that now.
Good sexy read. Pretty hot.... but would be WAY hotter with a longer sex scene. Too quick! Also, you switch between present and past tense just when the fucking gets going; kinda distracting. Still liked, thumbed. Good work. Brown hair?...brown hair? It's black not brown!!!
Octavia is not best pony, but is unquestionably hottest pony. Damn those fine flanks!
Kinky Octavia. Haven't seen that before hahaha but it was bucking awesome
Very rare to see a fic with a strait octavia, let alone a good clop fic. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_cake.png
I want to thumb this up but the current number has me stymied.
2581804 XD Didn't even notice. Did you like reading it?
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It was good, very fast and short though. I think it could have benefited from added length. (None of these were intended as euphemisms.)