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Oh dear Celestia. TOO much class.
Anyways, while I don't really like this, mostly because it's so sleazy, it's still well written and original, so you're getting an upvote from me.
Write on, dear sir! And hopefully try your hand at something a little more pleasant next time.
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I understand if it does not appeal to you. But know that I write on all ends of the spectrum, from romantic to sleazy to innocent. If you don't like this one, perhaps you will like some of the future stories I may write.
It's a greasy little clop fic. I guess if someone couldn't find something much better or had a thing for public exhibition this might do it for them but... yeah, Needs some formatting help.
-Chessie
1375435 That's why I'm following. But Chessie is right, you ought to break up those paragraphs with line breaks, it will make your story a lot more readable.
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I hope adding these indentations help.
1375476 Looks a lot better. Have a Pinkie.
1375476 Indeed they did.
-Chessie
Not bad, but abrupt. There wasn't much build-up to the actual sex, which itself was rather short.
Decent writing, properly cloppy and delightfully sleazy public rutting! That's always worth a thumb.
Me Gusta. To the point and very good clop. Nice use of different characters. ^_^
That was quite a nice read, I enjoyed it, and therefore you get a follow, good job, and keep up the good work
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I knew it! You clop.
Yeeessss, there isn't nearly enough hedonistic, spectator sport-esque public sex clop.
This is amazing, I hope you make more like this.
I liek
YES Found it
That was actually pretty darn good. Nice job with that little clop story. I'll be looking forward to reading more by you in the future.