This is a crossover of My Little Pony and Super Mario Galaxy. The events of this fanfic takes place after ’The Magic Duel’ and before ’Twilight’s Kingdom’. Anyway, hope you enjoy.
Grand Star Get Soundtrack
Power Star Get Soundtrack
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Pinkie Pie
Twilight Sparkle
Rarity
Applejack
Rainbow Dash
Fluttershy
Spike
Princess Celestia
Princess Luna
Princess Stella
Apple Bloom
Sweetie Belle
Scootaloo
Trixie Lulamoon
King Sombra (Hard to see in Night Mode)
Shadowbolt
NPC
Chapters (13)
Good chapter but the colored text makes it hard to read.
I'm interested in this story but I see a few glaring issues I mean no offense this is just constructive criticism 1. I fear a direct conversion of the source Material 2. The grammar could use some work I would recommend getting a few editors. I would also recommend you write the chapters in an external site such as Google docs with the grammerly addon to help with you grammar. then, copy and paste to story into fimfictcon, it will automatically convert the formatting to the proper code
That's a big gap of episodes.
Keep going! More!
This story reeks with adventure, I LOVE IT!!!
Harry Potter Easter Egg
I liked Super Mario Galaxy. Back when I played it much, I got all 120 stars with both characters, and even the 121st with Mario. Took long, and it wasn't easy, let me tell you.
Great work so far, I'll be sure to continue reading that soon. :)
Keep going!