I make stories that will never be written. That includes crossovers, alternate endings and more. So if I don’t see a story that I want, I’ll write it. Everything is possible.
A Pinkamena story plotted in the events of ‘Party of One’.
May contain blood and murder, if you don’t want to see that, just exit out and read another fanfic.
Let me explain briefly, I’ve seen fanfics about this subject and they were never good endings, so I thought I’d create my own piece and come out my good ending out of it. Enjoy :)
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only happy ending for this is "it was all just a dream"
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Eh, that’s too much of a cop out, but I get what you’re saying.
I have one criticism: this story is worded very strangely. I feel like some random words were just fed into a thesaurus:
Anyways I really liked how this part was worded
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Glad you noticed. Had you not decipher my author name yet? As you can see, I’m a fan of big vocabulary that I’m like a lyricist for a rapper (not actually). That’ll be how I will write my fanfics, as long as you understand what a paragraph’s focusing, we’re good here.
I'm not seeing any way for a good ending to come from this holy crap...
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Except you use said "big vocabulary" incorrectly?
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Just you wait, Twilight. By the end of his 'holy crap', you will see what I had in mind.
You know what they say, some rules are meant to be broken, that also applies to grammar. I want to keep my stories as unique as possible, which means sentences start with different letters, rare words will be utilized and most of the time, you won't see the same word referred to twice in a row. (Hopefully, I worded that correctly...)
I personally believe that all sapient, sentient beings must be given a chance at redemption, if possible. Only in rare cases is someone truly, irrevocably evil from the start to finish.
Also, if you are looking for unique words, especially for ones that Luna might be liable to use, I have a website that is very useful for tormenting your English professors.
https://www.phrontistery.info/
Also, if you want uniqueness, it is not just found in diction and word choice. It found in the way you write. For instance, I found myself wondering whether Pinkie Pie was just imagining her friends or if she was truly interacting with her spirits. That vagueness? That is unique. If you want unique diction, perhaps tie certain ways of speaking and thinking to certain characters, and modify their diction as necessary. For instance, Applejack is a apple farmer, so she might be familiar with and use words and terminology related to farming apples.
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You aren't being "unique" by screwing up the grammar and using a thesaurus to swap words around. You're just making your story a pain to read.
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