Breakfast at Pinkie Pie's

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superfun

superfun #1 · Jul 25th, 2020 · · ·

Is it weird that the only thing on my mind is wondering what the prize was for the winner of the bet?
I know it doesn't matter, but it's all I can think of

LewdChapter

LewdChapter #2 · Jul 25th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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As far as Rainbow was concerned, this lifestyle was akin to torture, but it was a torture she was willing to endure for the coveted prize: the loser would cover both halves of the next month's rent

It is, indeed, weird that you were thinking this, as the prize of the bet is stated here in the story

Trick Question

Trick Question #3 · Jul 25th, 2020 · 1 · ·

And I said, "What about Breakfast at Pinkie Pie's"
She said, "I think I remember the tale—
—and as I recall, I think, we both kinda liked it"
And I said, "Well, Ponk's one hot shemale"

LewdChapter

LewdChapter #4 · Jul 25th, 2020 · · ·

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That's the one

Vis-a-Viscera

Vis-a-Viscera #5 · Jul 25th, 2020 · 1 · ·

"Pinks, no…" Rainbow shakily set down her coffee, trying her hardest to find a way out of this sticky situation with her pride and diet intact. "I'm sticking to my guns. You said a month, and that month ends tonight, so—"
"If you give up now, I'll only make you pay half of my share."
That was more than enough for the starving athlete to completely throw away any sense of pride or self-respect in favor of her desire.

And 0-60 gets a brand new meaning.

Really like this fic, Lewd.

Fic's quite nice and well defined; there's some grammatical errors in it but it never loses me in any way, from tone to buildup to pace.

Quite rich too, with so surprisingly simple a premise, especially in what it promises toward the end.

TheWraithWriter

TheWraithWriter #6 · Jul 25th, 2020 · 1 · ·

Is there a word for horny and hungry? Because that's what I am right now.

Also, omg, I cannot believe you used that song for the titles.

superfun

superfun #7 · Jul 25th, 2020 · · ·

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...*facepalm*
Yeah, I don't know how I missed that.

CapNTilfy

CapNTilfy #8 · Jul 25th, 2020 · · ·

I'm just stopping by to say I love the reference in the chapter title.

And I said "Well that's one thing we got."

Good song. ^_^

LewdChapter

LewdChapter #9 · Jul 25th, 2020 · · ·

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Don't worry, uce, it happens

zachary12

zachary12 #10 · Jul 26th, 2020 · · ·

nice work

RK_Striker_JK_5

RK_Striker_JK_5 #11 · Jul 26th, 2020 · 1 · ·

Just the fic title and chapter title alone get a thumbs-up from me. I love that song. the rest, though? Hot, and I'm not just talking about the breakfast. :D I'd say both managed to win out in the end.

RandomPony1947

RandomPony1947 #12 · Jul 31st, 2020 · · ·

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Song? I thought the title was a reference to "Breakfast at Tiffiny's", the classic novel which was adapted to film staring Audry Hepburn.

LewdChapter

LewdChapter #13 · Aug 1st, 2020 · · ·

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The title is a reference to the song Breakfast at Tiffany's. The song details a failing relationship, in which the woman says the pair have nothing in common anymore. And he says

What about Breakfast at Tiffany's?

She said "I think I remember the film, and as I recall, I think we both kinda liked it"

And I said "well, that's one thing we've got."

It's a song about the movie about the book. I highly recommend the song, Breakfast at Tiffany's by Deep Blue Something. It's a bop

RK_Striker_JK_5