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Course you, Teen, course you for distracting me from my stories.
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Hey, at least it's short.
1162998 Yeah dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png
I just recently had a similar idea :D
great story
*Reads Description*
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I'll uh....I'll just go
But also, I do believe stories that have separate chapters as different short stories instead of all being a part of one story are against the rules. Just a word of advice, cause I've seen a friend of mine get banned for a bit before for doing something similar.
Yay!
A new fic from HLT!! This distraction came at just the right time! And the story was quite entertaining! I especially enjoyed the shower scene. 
And I can only conclude that the beeping must have been the smoke detector going off from Sweetie Belle burning something! 
I'll look forward to more of this as you add to it! Have a thumbs up!
Dammit, I was writing a sad fic, then I just couldn't resist giving this a look.
I have to write like 2000 more words today! I think I lost the mood, cause that was too funny.
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There's multiple instances of "My 60 minute challenge stories" on this site, I don't believe that it is against the rules. Even so, I could potentially connect all the stories someway, as I was planning to if I ever finished all the individual stories "Hey guys, is it just me or are we all wetting the bed lately!?"
...what the fudge did I just read?
THIS IS HORRIBLE! HOW COULD YOU WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS?
*looks both ways*
*favorites*
Good job, write more please
1163084 After checking the FAQ again, there is, indeed, a rule that says not to post, "Multiple chapters of stories as separate stories." So those other stories are probably breaking the rules if the chapters aren't connected to each other
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You are interpreting that rule wrong, it's actually saying you can't make multiple story submissions with chapters as separate stories (basically the exact opposite of what you think). Like say in this chapter I firmly established that there was a bedwetting curse on everypony (no that isn't canon >.>). If I went and submitted a new story as "Wet Dreams and Spurting Streams Part 2" then that would be against the rules.
A story about ponies wetting the bed? Well okay then, but shouldn't this have a 'random' tag? It's quite a random topic. I was fairly entertained at some parts, but others just confused me a little bit. Is Rarity supposed to be incontinent in this? I'm not quite sure if the ending was supposed to be arousing or amusing, meaning the bit where Rarity flicks herself off.
I liked this, all in all. It's just a little bit confusing to me.
1163135 Fair enough then
I personally didn't enjoy the idea, but the story is absolutely well-written, you're a nice writer, your descriptions allowed me to figure in my mind all the scenaries
I'm just going to walk away before I say something I'll regret...
*exits stage left*
Gigitty
1163067 I believe the rule is that you can't upload chapters of the same story as individuals. I may be wrong though.
I doubt they will care, trust me some of the stories i have seen >.<
What.The.FUCK DID I JUST READ!?
(good story btw.
)
oh lawdy
i love you HLT
I'm incredibly interested. Can't wait for the rest of the story. But can you hurry up on the Fluttershy chapter? Please?
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This story is actually inspired by the first watersports clopfic I ever read: Fluttershy Bedwetting, while it's just a screenshot of a post on ponychan or /co/ it's super well written and was the single piece of work that locked me into the whole clopping thing. The Fluttershy chapter for this story will be quite different (It is planned to revolve around Fluttershy falling asleep at a picnic with the mane 6).
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Sounds hot. Should be "enjoyable", if you know what I mean.
Yay!
Very nice, very sweet. Some instances of overinformation in sentences, but- really enjoyable.
And your Fluttershy plan sounds very intriguing.
Example on overinformation, and some notes:
Moving herself so her crotch was facing the rushing water, Rarity let out a soft moan as the warm water ponded onto her sensitive vulva and washed all of the yellow stains out from where she had wet herself.
You could simplify, seeing as we already know what made the stains. It's not in bad form to write it like this, but I often think it feels smother. and more aesthetic if you cut down on them.
Moving herself so her crotch was facing the rushing water[.] Rarity let out a soft moan as the warm water ponded onto her sensitive vulva, and washed out all of the yellow stains from her coat.
There's one more, kind of odd, sentence in here-
" Drinking a glass of water before she fell asleep had been the unfortunate change in her routine that would lead to the predicament she would find herself in as she awoke that morning."
I would have cut this paragraph, and moved the information to after she woke up, like having her say it or just narrating it, but that's just how I prefer to do things-
'as if' can be a bit odd to read sometimes.
In your "if someone had opened her vulva and looked inside" it is very justified, but in "if someone had been here to hear it, they would have heard" it seems a bit superfluous, just describing the sound would have simplified it a bit.
Otherwise, very nice descriptions, and good natural idea, not too - pornified. Which makes it extra erotic in a way? Good job!
Happy to see you still writing. Hope my silly notes are of some use, or just something to think about.
Awesomely hilarious.
It would be funny to see everypony hit with a bedwetting curse and they all need diapers!
Un will there be- well you know
Who's next?
>could only mean one thing
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1163070 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Sweetie_Belle_lolface.png
1164778 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Fluttershy.png
Love your work, as always. You should really continue some of your other fics as well!
I can't tell if it is arousing or funny either way good story...here have a Rarity:
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ive been in your shed and saw al the animals
What the..?
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Need the next chapter!
1164778 when will you be updating the story?
1164778 DUDE UPDATE THE STORY ITS BEEN ABOUT A YEAR SINCE YOU UPDATED THE STORY COME ON UPDATE IT