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Meet Garble the dragon, Gemluck the changeling, Gloria the griffon, Fern Flare the kirin, Honey Suckle the unicorn and Melody the earth pony. Join them in their adventures and see all the mischief, drama and romance on Honey Bunny Sunny.
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I think the idea is interesting, but you don't seem to know "show don't tell."
Don't talk about Starlight's job: show her doing it. Actions can be more interesting to the average reader.
I agree with Redandready45. The story is interesting and easy to follow but you do need to show rather than tell. Like "Starlight read over the report, her eyes scanning the page carefully." Or describe how the office looks. Is it tidy, messy?
Okay I'll try.
These feels like a real MLP situation.
Umm I'll take that as a compliment 😉.
This is pretty interesting so far and seen how starlight and the others are doing after twilight Coronation
Well then what a good way to start a school year 😅 And both Gemluck and Garble are Sharing of Room this would be a very interesting year for them lol I do like to see how Know how much can they get along with each other
Honey Suckle sure gonna have a very interesting school year as well I wonder if she's going to meet Garble and Gemluck soon? Anyway is any up like other creatures joining as well like the crystal ponies and Buffalo's
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Nah. Just Kirins, Hippogriffs, Griffons,Dragons, Changelings and Ponies. But aren't Crystal Ponies just Ponies but crystally🤔🤔
Wanna know the names of the main cast of the story?
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Oh ok sure I mean if you dont mind
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Okay. A pony named Melody
A Kirin named Fern Flare
A griffon named Gloria
And the return of our favorite trio of villains Cozy Glow, Lord Tirek and Queen Chrysalis.🤫🤫
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I think since you like the story I'll add two bonus chapters even if it's one in the morning and just went through five cups of coffee.😂😁🤭
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Oh hey thats cool and nice name of those characters and can't wait
Gemluck was busy staring at the new girl with a dreamy look on his face.
'*sigh* Such beauty. And those eyes. Don't forget her hair. Her sweet looking hair.' Gemluck thought to himself.
Honey Suckle looked at Gemluck and in a trance she was day dreaming. 'Who is this handsome creature that stands before me. So handsome and those eyes. I wonder if he's good at magic like I am. I mean he has a horn.' Honey Suckle was snapped out of her day dream by Gloria who slapped her across her face.
Ohh something tells me that cupid strike again lol 😆
well things got better for honey getting to meet more people and hey Gemluck and Garble are getting along with each others thats cool
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In a few chapters we'll get to see how they bonded and how they met Gloria and Fern Flare.
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Sweet can't wait 😄
Aww thats so cute that Gemluck and Honey have a crush with each other but they can be a little awkward with each other lol despite they only ment them only one time but hey love is love baby and hey thats cool that there friends is helping them out and I'm sure those two will found a way and wow thanks for the shout out im glad it help man *hug 🤗 and your story is pretty nice and cute and I hope to see this story continues but no rush ok
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Ok you're the best 😁😁
Aww sunburst 🥰
ohh some Creature is getting nervous lol thats cute
wow Melody sound like a fan pony and it looks like he made a great start making friends with Gemluck and Garble thats pretty awesome I mean yeah it can be nervous at 1st but Once you get to know each other things work out pretty well and now the boys are going to meet with the girls and hey the girls like to play Orges and Oblietes ( Even though I'm not a big fan of Dungeons & Dragons that still cool ) I guess that's one of their girls night out just like spike big mac and discord lol and it looks like garble gave a push for gremmy Even though that's not what he means but it works I guess lol 😅 those two are so cute together and hello Melody looks like he got the hot for Fern Flare aww lol and Looks like they're gonna have fun Sleep over can't wait to see how this work out
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Oh just you wait. Chapter 7 coming out either in a few hours or tomorrow
So Melody never had a sleep over well good thing his new friends can help with that and looks like everything turns out pretty well and they look like they have fun but things kinda don't go so well between Honey and Gemluck after the awkward situation poor honey she most be crushed about that and I know that gremmy didn't know whats going on but I'm glad they work things out and Finally confessed to each other so
I'm happy this chapter is so cute And I can't wait to see how their relationship grows and I wonder how there friends will react to this news 😊
To Honey and Gemluck ❤
Te amor and mi amor those are Spanish right?
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Eeeyep I love you and my love
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Aww thats so sweet
If this is rated E, then why are there so many red tags?
It's really good to see the story again and of course there friends Have to go teasing lol oh brother But they got Their taste of their own medicine and And looks like they want to hang out at the tree of harmony known as the tree house harmony i wonder if harmony will be there ( As in the spirit that the young six Encounter with ) This should be very interesting i guess we will find out the next time 😊
whoa i think your # is kinda glitchy because I see Gore, self harm, Profanity, Suicide, Narcotics, Violence, and oh boy sex and festish 😥 I think you need to fix that because That would set the wrong message
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It was a joke 😂😑😅🤭
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It was a joke. Did it accidentally 🤭😲😳😬
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Oh ok lol 😅 I just didn't want you to get in trouble for false information
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😂😂😂😅😬It was accidental. I was just playing around.
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ok lol no worries then 😊
"DOES THIS ALWAYS HAPPEN!?" Melody asked as they ran. Every student, teacher or anyone they passed including Starlight, Trixie, Sunburst, Maud and Mud Briar responded. "EEEEYEP!"
Big Mac, who happened to be near was irritated by ponies using his catch phrase, yelled, "HEY!"
Random big mac lol thats funny
You mean yell right
Ok so those kids are heading to the crystal tree house but it looks like garble has a little crush on Gloria thats so cute but it looks like gemmy and honey are setting up something for those two and I wonder what kind of plan are they tried to do I guess we'll find out next time 😊
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Oops. Yeah yell
Really like this so far
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Thanks.
Sorry I have to ask but is this story going to continue
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Yes. I'm working on the tenth chapter
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Not as much as it used to be. My current favorite ship is SciSet.
Wow it's really cool to see the story again so anyway garble, Gloria, Melody and Fern are on our way to the Crystal Tree House while there was still talking with each other they meet up with a zebra name Zechariah they introduced themselves but unfortunately they didn't notice the two lovebirds gem and honey are not there so they had for the Crystal Tree along with Zech meanwhile gem and honey are basically setting up some plan to get Gloria and garble together and they are so cute together but they had to prepare because the others are nearby and it looks like they finally made it to the Crystal Tree House and I wonder what kind of plan are they up to I guess we'll find out next time.
Well then that was random 😅
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It sure is
Twilight I know you tried but sometimes their hate is just too deep
So it looks like Twilight took the statue of the villains to Canterlot so they can be heavily guarded if anyone try to free them which that is the smartest idea to be honest with you but it looks like Twilight has some regrets not for the two of them but one particular creature and that would be cozy glow I really wish there was another way to bang her sense back but sometimes their hate is just too deep but somewhere in the self conscious mind cozy she looks like she was feeling guilty for everything so maybe it's not too late for this kid but anyway it's very nice to see the story again and I wonder what's going to happen next I guess we'll find out next time