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pretty ok so far...
Thank you. ^^
This is gonna be an eye opener...
This is shaping up to be a very interesting story. I've always been of the opinion that machines are just as capable of complex emotion as humans, and seeing the dynamic between the characters in concern to the nascient personality that is Twibot is very well done. It seems like Greg is battling with the realization that maybe, just maybe, Twi is more than simply a pile of gears and circuits, while Matt is still treating her like a 'thing'.
I wonder where Matt got her from? I have a few off-hand guesses, but nothing concrete as of yet.
One major problem I noticed is that there are several instances where you keep switching back and forth between first and third person perspective;
being one example. Aside from that, there is little in the way of technical errors.
I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes! Even though I already know where it ultimately ends up.
OH MY GAWD, HE POSTS!
...
And didn't tell me?
Now I have to read and do it with a rootbeer in hand, to calm my furious nerves.
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That is my fault. I originally wrote in first person perspective but as the story changed it went to third. I thought I have gotten it all fixed but it seems a few I have missed. Thank you for pointing that out.
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Lol sorry. Honestly this one made me a little nervous as it is so different than what I usually write.
Are you going to finish the story
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Yes I will. Im already working on the second chapter.
you know, I thought it would be a part of the truth behind mlp. I also thought they'd be cultist if they were.
I love the story so far
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Thank you that means a lot.
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The story changed so much from its original concept becoming its own thing. Originally it was a guy being stalked by a Twilight Sparkle that might or might not have been real and changed so much as it was being written.
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fair.
Also we got more patchwork ponies, nice.
Also Fluttershooze should be renamed to "Flutters", and I'm now picturing something like Flutters, but with Twilight.
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Is this the same universe thats like in the my little pony ride
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No this is our world...kinda. Pretty ordinary.
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Yeah instead the my little pony the ride universe is my personal favorite
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Yeah are you going to continue the series
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Yes I am. I’m working on the second part right now. Though it will take me awhile, their is so much to it.
Why not make a timeline of the actual things going on because I can’t make heads or tails of anything
Also why not include some elements from the SCP foundation it is so much more terrifying than your stories
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This story has nothing to do with my other series this is its own thing if that helps.
Moar?
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I have moar coming to this story. It was going in a different direction than I wanted so I been doing some rewrites.
Waiting patiently and respectfully.
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I am sorry things are taking a lot longer than anticipated.
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I love the story so far. I hope there's an update soon.
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I had stopped working with it for awhile to change a few things. It was turning into a rom-com rather than a thriller. After my new story I’ll pick it up again.
I finally got around to reading this and I have to say this story has be hook. I am REALLY curious to know where this 'Twilight Sparkle' comes from and how it evolves. I mean Breathing? Awesome work. I can't wait for the next installment.
no one even questioned that huh
I really hope this updates eventually. Also greg doesn't seem like the inquisitive type
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Does ask a good question: Does an AI look at the world the same way a person would? And if so should it be judged by the same standard even if it understands what it is doing?
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I want to believe me. All of it has been work. Business has been good, great even but man I just am so drained when I get home. I've just been starting at my screen most days trying to wake up. I will get back into the swing of things but man its hard.
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Take as much time as you need, no rush
ooh i cant wait for more! (i mean take your time though, your health is more important!) i also wanted to ask the source of the picture bc i remember a fluttershy version too and wanted to know if theres a pinkie pie version! ty for your stories, they always make me feel all shivery and keep my interest so well