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Opium4TmassS


Klaatu barada nikto =^.^=

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This story is a sequel to Why I stopped watching My Little Pony


"The Diabolical sometimes assumes the aspect of the Good, or even embodies itself completely in its form. If this remains concealed from me, I am of course defeated, for this Good is more tempting than the genuine Good."
-Franz Kafka

Artwork Done by the amazingly talented Maii. Follow her on fimfic to see some of her great work and her devianArt page KKrazi-DV
Co-written with the incredible MisterNick. I suggest following him as he writes fantastic stories.

Also check out the prequel story Flutterschmooze

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Comments ( 68 )

This is all very surreal. It is extremely difficult to visualize the various scenes playing out and doesn't read like an actual story. It honestly feels like it was based off a dream.

Kind of reminds me of The Darkness, been around since God uttered the phrase: "Let there be light." Also reminds me a bit of The Candy Mare, can't stop eating whatsoever.

So that's the identity of our supernatural mind f***er?

7441863 I don't really want to give to much of it away. But their will be more explanation in the Halloween story "The Truth Behind My Little Pony."

7441934 Some shadow being though? Gotta be strong to be able to show itself in broad daylight, even disguised in a Fluttershy costume.

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Uh... Shit, this was a pretty good read if I might say so myself. Just like the others in this read's universe. Still, pic related.

Neat story. Times like this I would ask: "What would Ashley do?"

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!"

Pinkamena giggled as she lit the fire under pot in which Tirek sat. "Sacrificing you to the Lord of Potatoes, duh."

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"WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!"
Pinkamena giggled as she lit the fire under pot in which Tirek sat. "Sacrificing you to the Lord of Potatoes, duh."

I come up with this crap daily. :rainbowlaugh:

7442503 That's very good I like it a lot.

7442506 I actually have an entire fic based around thoughts like that. I updated it just today.

7442521 Really. I have to take a look at it.

7442600 It's all wacko-crazy, and I don't let anything into it except for ideas like those. There'll be more Pinkamena in the story soon... I just have to finish moving to my new house first.

7442603 I understand. When its ready let me see it.

7442606 I'll try to remember to PM you next time it updates. :twilightsmile:

Creepy. Not as good the first one but still made me shiver. Does this mean Anna will use herself as bait to lure bad people to their doom?

7442606 Just one question : WHERE IS THE SEQUEL ?!!!!!!

7447774 The next story "The Truth about My Little Pony" will be coming out in October.

7448256 October? WHY AREN'T WE IN OCTOBER ALREADY?!!!!

Hek

Oh my god
I want more
But not till October whyyyyy

It was glorious, I came in with a might as well mindset and was amazed at how actually interesting it is. Man, this story needs more attention, hell it, along with the previous, should be on the creepypasta wiki, 'cause damn, better than I thought it would be. (haven't read prequel yet)

7470488 Thank you very much it means a lot. It wouldn't have been as good without the help of MisterNick.

7470496 Cheers to him too then.:pinkiecrazy:

I deffinitely enjoyed this one the most of those currently released in the series, not certain if it was just the difference in format or if this one was actually better quality. But format aside, I kind of struggle to see how the previous two really tie in outside of a malevolent entity(ies) and the loosely constructed concept that the mlp show doesn't exist. The latter is where most of my concern stems from though. In "why I stopped watching mlp", hasbro says they never have nor did they have any plans to create/air an mlp show and there weren't any available plushies/toys; the prequel explained that these were not available to the public. This all leaves me to question however, why hasbro would have created the meet and greet event, or how the general population even knows about the show.

Each story in its own right is worth reading however, and I thank you for your work. Some of the things I enjoyed in this story were that I found it well paced, the characters were understandable, and the story ends with a great potential for more sick and twisted events like a horror should.

Heres hoping october comes soon.

7483955 Thank you for the compliment. Their will be more explanation that will answer that question in October.

I'm calling Satan for this.

Also, never make deals with demons. I don't care how much they follow the rules, they do not create happy outcomes from what they desire the most. Think of it this way:

Remember those Satan rooms in The Binding of Isaac? This is similar to that. You give up your soul to gain possible power or encounter a fraud. Basically, giving hearts away to get power is a sign of a devil's deals. In a game, I guess it is good to do it if you think it is worth it, but acts what it is, a game. In real life, there are loopholes and such you forget. Your deal might backfire if you do not have an omniscient mind.

Anyway, I got him on the phone now. He just told me that, these ponies, were, not...

Wait, they were not your creations? Then who the hell created them?

Okay, I gotcha. These must be demons that shift forms to whatever they desire.

He just hung up.

Well, he has no idea what these things are, but I have a theory. These creatures must be simple demons that prey on whoever they desire. They can change forms to whatever they want, and they can manipulate their bodies easily due to their spiritual capabilities. Don't worry guys, a demon is still supernatural.

I don't know what I just came up with there, but I like it. The story is nice, but it could always use the little proofread once in a while. Good concept.

7731736 lol thank you that means a lot. We will be seeing Anna again.

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I think I have that reasoning structured. You see, the first story created the events that led to the annihilation of My Little Pony. After, whatever the hell that craze was, I believe they canceled work on the show.



!WARNING SPOILERS TURN BACK NOW!



Here comes story number two. Said show has not been created due to past events. Little girl discovers the show, despite it being nonexistent and somehow omnipresent on the television. The show quickly turns from good to horrifyingly scary after episode 13 of season 3, which we all should know is the last episode of that season. Episode 14 comes out, shows horrific scenes, and repeats with every episode further on. Let's also point out that the Twilight Sparkle doll that the girl possessed is somehow sentient. After immediate proof by Hasbro that the show does not nor will ever exist, the story ends. I believe that this "never had the idea" attitude was due to the events of the last story. So far, this story chain is looking supernatural.

Then comes story number three, except, we have another main character that is a little girl. After hearing a warning from the voice in her head, which I believe is a rebellious demon or an angel, and discovering her brother to be watching the show, she is scolded at by her mother and notices the two realistic ponies next to her brother. She then sleeps, wakes up at night, and hears footsteps. One of the supposed demons, which was taking the form of or is Pinkie, enters her room and finds her. Pinkie attempts to devour her with deceit, the tool of a demon, but fails. Luckily, she and her demon pals are given a deal by the girl that they can instead eat anyone who goes against the girl. They agree and devour whoever they want that she hates afterwards.

This is the story that I perceive it as. This entire My Little Pony act is a huge attempt to steal others' lives to satisfy the hellish monsters from below, or above. And that, that was my theory!

I knew I was missing a story, thought it was Flutter, but this is even better *__*

7787533 I'm glad you enjoyed it. Btw I'm linking all stories to The Truth Behind My Little Pony to keep it organized.


THESE CLIFFHANGERS. THEY'RE DESTROYING ME.

7804508 Anna will be coming back shortly. Not in the next one but very soon.

I've stumbled into your works, and this is beautiful. I really hope you continue on this idea in some way.

8039686 Thank you that means alot.

Jesus Christ...what the Hell is pinkie some type of demon/cannibal...hehehe

8091024 It's an ongoing series.

8091174 but still, I want to know, is she or is she not..

If she is, then we're doom, just think of it...the most notorious fourth wall breaker, but also a demon/cannibal..

'Sees pinkie in the t.v. as she slowly crawls out before looking at you with those dark eyes, Those horrible dark eyes and before you know, she disappeared and as you turn around...

I'm not going to tell you the ending because you already know what's going to happen.

8091977 I wouldn't call it a forth wall break, more of a doorway.

Hrm.,.. I likie, but the first part was best until 'meat'.

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I wouldn't call her nerfed. More on a different plane of existence and talking into someone's head.

Hey, Opium4TmassS bad pitch, good idea,

I had an idea for a story in which a teenager robs a house only realizing the reason the doors and windows were unlocked were that the owner of said house is doing the how to play with ponies ritual,

so I'm asking permission to steal borrow this idea, write a story, and forward it to you as a sort of filler for the 'How to play with ponies' story you worked on.

The sounds of moaning and creaking woke Anna in the dim night

plsno

You're not killing my daydream of wanting to be a pony in Equestria dude.

Give up already :trixieshiftright:

...... Please?:twilightblush:

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