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Klaatu barada nikto =^.^=


This story is a sequel to The Truth Behind My Little Pony

No wealth, no ruin, no silver, no gold. Nothing satisfies me but your soul. (Oh Death)
Well, I am Death. None can excell. I'll open the door to Heaven or Hell.

Jen Titus-Oh Death.

Special thanks to Cowriter MisterNick for his help in writing this story.
Also A shout-out to Luna Bruce for her helpful ideas.

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Comments ( 35 )

Wow. That was a handful to take in. I love the creepy atmosphere. What was she turned into though? I couldn't tell, was it a timber wolf?

7882318 Thankies for the comment and the fav.

She was turned into a pony in order for the door to work.

7883080 Thank you that means a lot.

Let me be honest. When I first read the title, I tought it was a clopfic. I was plesantly surprised to not find a story about ponies fucking other ponies.

Oh right, great story mate :raritywink:

Wow. This is now one of my favorite story in the serie.:pinkiehappy:

Also, are we gonna see what happened to the girl in Wanna play?

7884040 I do have plans for brining Anna back. A little older this time around.

"silver coat and mane. I even asked for a set of glasses" :pinkiegasp:


And perhaps Tabitha becomes Diamond Tiara.

7886295 The show is a doorway. Its how they get in and out.

7887248 I also made another comment. :twilightblush:

7887334 Basically, I said that maybe Karen might have become Silver spoon.
"silver coat and mane. I even asked for a set of glasses" :pinkiegasp:


And perhaps Tabitha becomes Diamond Tiara.

That was the comment that I copied and pasted. :pinkiecrazy:

7885151 Yes they become Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara

7888170 I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

They're using the dead to create these creatures? Damn, you can't stop death...

I believe the main problem you have with grammar is commas, but I'm not sure if it's just your style of writing or not. I like the story and its premise. It's kind of weird to read your stories though, as they tell me in the back of my mind to kill them all until there's none left to kill.


7889532 I like to think I'm slowly improving my grammar. (At least I hope so.)

Oh, something just dawned on me. Throughout this bundle of stories, it's plainly obvious that the ponies are carnivorous, cunning beasts that kill anyone to satisfy themselves. Now, the question is, how would a predatory human work?

Even though it won't happen in the stories, I believe that it might be possible if these ponies screw up somewhere, because they probably do at some points. Imagine a person that instead of running away and using the flight response when against these ponies, he attacks.

With an axe to the face.

And attempts to rip the ponies apart and eat them like what they would've done to him.

Basically, I'm talking about a human that's willing to hunt, kill, and devour these ponies. Sanity and morality are out of the debate. Just what would it take for a human to be the much more horrifying carnivorous predator of an already terrifying carnivorous predator of humans?

7896732 Interesting question. I'd say not much. After all look at modern serial killers how little it took them to do what they did. I guess you can do horrendous things if you rationalize it enough.


Oh, so I can get three insane people that are armed with chainsaws and other sharp objects, convince them that these creatures are real, and shove them in front of a TV that could possibly play the accursed show. Whatever happens next will either involve me either writing down some notes from the discovery or running like hell from a carnivorous pony.

-is so depressed she read this so late-
Now, we know why Trixie said "It won't be much like her". She turned into Diamond Tiara, I see. xD Tabitha seemed like a good person. XP How dare Karen's family get over her.

7925668 Well thirty years is a long time.

It is interesting how they can make a human ghost into a pony, make me wonder what else can they do.

I whole heartedly love your work!

It's surreal and gripping. The world building is rough around the edges, big time, but the plot and story is solid.

Thankies that really means alot.

Seriously loving all the stories in this plotline, so great, 10 out of 10, would read again

Thank you that really means a lot.

Is there a story for Luna? Like.... how /she/ came to be?

I haven't yet. But who knows in the future.

Yeah. Cause... /Celestia/ is supposedly a... /fire demon/ on this? It would be nice to see if there is a Luna, and how she came to be.

I don't want to remember.

"You’re dead Karen. You been dead for a long, long time," said Trixie.

You've been watching Jacob's Ladder, haven't you?

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