Comments ( 6 )

:twilightsmile: I'll blame Lavender
:raritywink: She always wanted a sibling
:trollestia: Just don't have a heart attack before your done
:moustache: He was coming and going anyways
:facehoof:

This was pretty sweet and really them! I liked it!
Especially Lavender and her comments.

Great job!:moustache::twilightsmile:

TwiSpike yes

I have to say, I think what I appreciate most here is how you hint at who Spike's wife was, but you never directly state it. I also think you did a nice job on expressing Spike's feelings and needs after she was gone.

Seamless exposition to build up this future, but then you give us so little in it, least of all no boinking!

I wanted the boinking!

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