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Golden Flare


I love to create stories.

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[A different type of Displaced Story]

Samuel Southwest, age 16, high school student, and his parents have mysteriously went missing recently. Before his next of kin could be reached for temporary custody, a "Merchant" as he calls himself left him a box with a "D-Watch" inside it as Sam's only clue to find his parents. But once he put it on, he was warped to another world that seems to have dangers and adventures around every corner, all having potential leads to the whereabouts of his disappeared family.

Not only that, but he has to do it all under the noses of the entire populace of this new world AND go back to school as well.

Cyber Sam's odyssey of mystery begins.

Will he find his parents? And what is the reason for all of this?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 19 )

Awesome work my friend. I cant wait to see what happens next.

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Ur welcome. Like I said, cant wait for more. :pinkiehappy:

It's probably just me, but I think the name of the third chapter should be changed. Calling something "The Big Battle" makes it sound like it's this story's climax.

10574023 Yeah, sorry, I was pressed for time, and didn't have a better name

Excellent work, dude. I was waiting on when you'd update this. Hope to see more soon.

Also, if you're thinking on changing the title for the chapter, I think "Battle Royale" would suffice.

Yugioh kingdom hearts. Digimon frontier digimon tamers

10974052 Good, but also the quotes I made in the chapter :twilightsheepish:

We're fixing the mess Sunset Shimmer created tomorrow.

Well...can't say it wasn't fun while it lasted.

"The Magic of Friendship doesn't JUST exist in Equestria...it's everywhere." Twilight turned to see her friends hugging and smiling, "You can seek it out, or you can forever be alone. The choice is yours."

That's a riveting little speech Twi...here's my response.
Super Mario Bros. Underground Theme - YouTube
(This, but in the key of 'Liar')

Hey dude. I was thinking on making a crosssover story with Cyber Sam and Digital Dustin inspired by Ben 10/Generator Rex: Heroes United. What do you think?

11289671 Sure, just PM me and we’ll hash out the details :twilightsmile:

Word of advice: Be cautious if or when you decide you want to cross-over with another Displaced Story. Doing so can make or break a story depending on how you handle it. Try to avoid cross-overs that serve no purpose to the story and don't try to do too many.

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