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This actually started out surprisingly good, more so then I'd been expecting for such a simple idea. But that just goes to show that a good writer can make a story out of anything.
But the moment Slayer leaves the forest it goes downhill. In particular the body switch at the end left me feeling disappointed with how contrived it was.
If I ever come across this story again in the future i'll give it another look. But I don't think I can give it a follow as is.
I hope this is updated soon, I like how you kept the Doom Slayer silent. This is very well done.
Honestly, I’m not a fan of body swapping stories or just stories that have it in general, but this has me intrigued. Keep up the good work can’t wait to see what comes next.
Personally I really like how you made the characters interact you should continue it
That is a weapon, NOT a teleporter.
The longer the Icon of Sin remains on Earth the stronger he gets!!!!
You can't just blow a hole in the surface of Mars.
I would have gone with FlutterdDoom.
Not a bad story so far, at least the buildup sounds interesting.
Also if you are looking to commission a cover art, just want to let you know that I am open for commission , here is the link to my DA is you want to take a look.
https://www.deviantart.com/amalgamzaku
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Appreciate the kind words and thanks for the offer, might consider it once the fic is all wrapped up.
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WATCH ME
Big oof
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World Nymph?
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Hm?
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Artwork. I can't find anything about it, so I assume it's your creation?
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That would be correct. I'll elaborate on its powers a bit more in coming chapters.
Flutterguy and Doomshy
This was surprisingly deeper then what I was expecting, like the dream sequence, along with actual dialogue of the Doom Slayer himself and actual backstory to him now. Nice to see that they now all have the Doomsayer's equivalent armor now. The build up in tension is great so far along with the drama, and I can't wait for the actual action finally starting.
Keep up the good work
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Nah FlutterDoom sounds way better then DoomShy
Gotta say this is a odd crossover of DOOM and the whole swapping body's thing i just find it very strange
Updates?
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One of these days, got a lot to deal with recently. Haven't ditched the story yet though!
Can't wait to see them battle against the Icon of Sin!!! Also, when exactly does this take place in the MLP FiM timeline?
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Hey, glad you like it. It doesn't take place anywhere within the canon timeline. I'm just mixing and matching what I like from show lore with this AU fic canon, hope it's not too confusing.
Welp... I'm on board
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Thanks for the reminder that I need to wrap up this fic sometime haha
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I know how you feel
Flutterguy is playing bfg division
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lmao or e1m1
BOI HAVE YOU LOST YOUR GODDAMN MIND BECAUSE I'LL HELP YOU FIND IT
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Oh hey, glad to see you're still reading. Any thoughts/opinions so far (besides Healing Hoof being too wholesome for her own good :3 )?
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Besides the obligatory there's-not-enough-disturbingly-detailed-descriptions-of-violent-death, i'd say it's pretty good. Is Deag Grav the one possessing Sunbutt, or is it one of his minions?
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What, the sex-in-dead-refugee-blood sequence inspired by the holocaust wasn't enough for ya? Glad you like it though.
As for who's possessing 'Sunbutt'...why yes it is Deag. After Healing and Dash's arcs wrap up, he'll become the antagonist for the final arc as they all fight to free Canterlot. But as per usual, there will be plot twists and oh so much pony violence :)
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I thought it wasn't descriptive enough. Can't help it.
Something's wrong with my mind, to be saying such things
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Okay, since you're my most loyal fan, I'll add in an extremely over-bearing and gruesome death scene the very next chapter just for you. Catch it next time on ponyball zeeeeeeeee
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Yay praise be to thatboi
Nice
I can't help but wonder when The Slayer and Swordsmane are going to make another appearance.
Aww... I want more... GIVE ME MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hey, glad to see you're liking the fic!
More is coming, don't worry.
And violence. Lotsa violence, featuring Equestria's darlings, Swordsmane and the Slayer...
Exquisite. Moar dakka?
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Hope Healing Hoof's demise satiated your bloodlust lol
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For now, yes
wait this is cancelled why
Please don't tell me that this story is dead forever. I'll cry😢. Thatboi please get back to this someday I really enjoyed it.